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i would like to hear the music behind this. that would be interesting
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somebody needs to comment on a couple of other songs, just sayin ;)
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@sidshovel - I wanted to use the word rhyme and I didn't want to change the other word, so i just added 'ment'…
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@sidshovel - refinement is an actual word, the point was to make it one up and still fit the music :) thanks f…
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@robwills - you just need a place that has no transient lightng. I live out in semi-rural areas so the nights l…
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great lyrics. good sentiment. perfect choice of music. really sets the overall mood :)
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I thought folklore would sou…
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@carroll - thanks for the comment.. new genre :)
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@sidshovel - ok, I have to admit that on this one i'm a little lost. it could be i'm just tired :). Iike the m…
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i've been fortunate to live …
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Sounds like my mind on most …
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I understood it.. to me they lyrics are fine, but then 99.99% of what I write nobody gets so.... :)
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I picture an elderly guy sitting on his porch rocking while strumming a dobro with his basset hound at his feet 😂 has that old timey feel to it. Nice guitar work
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The other option is to simply block them, like I have 3 people now.. if they can't be respectful and want to scratch whatever itch they have, and continue to be insulting, then I don't have to deal with their non-sense.. problem solved.
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@OnlyGavin - And lewis carroll made up a whole language :)
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@OnlyGavin - the grammatical mistakes are intentional. there is even a made up word - conspirations.. that I mad…
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@sidshovel - great lyrics. whose alice? . perfect ballad melody to go with the lyrics.
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if you have a post left to open comments, that's fine. but what's been happening lately is that political, sociological and religious comments are being made where the OP specifically requested the subject kept the lyrics themselves. And in one i…
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@RainyDayMan - This works perfectly. I'll have to try this next time. I like how your lyrics flow and tell a …
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@RainyDayMan - Thanks owen.
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No, you have to follow rules. this section is about lyrics. this goes into the general discussion forum.
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This needs to be in the general comments section
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@RainyDayMan - Thanks owen, this was the 5th attempt before I gave up and went with it. I've entered these ly…
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@sidshovel - thanks. I thought those mispronunciations of ides, gave it character. so I left them :)
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@sidshovel - forgot about them :)
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@ElvisNash - I actually wrote if for an AI song writing contest in another forum. I decided to post it here als…
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@robwills - you can use distortion, just turn the volume down a notch, that's all you have to do.
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@robwills - sounds a lot cleaner.. you can hear the vocals over the guitar. well done :)
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