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I LOVED the progression from one castaway Island to the next with a repeating result. Then the final "island" in which one 'casts away' his/her own self. Excellent.
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This really does a good job (both in the lyric and the music) of driving home the idea that "You can never go home again" because "home" is a place AND a time, not just a place. It spoke to me emotionally and intellectually. inspired prosody be…
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Powerful lyric. Effective lyric. I'm a fan of it.
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My fault. . . I skipped a step. Choose "select". When you choose "select," there will be a menu dropping down. The top choice will be "All." What's happening if you don't "Select," then "All," is that you are only treating the single t…
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"As they burn down Californi…
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Don't be real worried about …
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WOW........ Just WOW. Correct me if I'm wrong, but there is absolutely NO A.I. component to this. Correct? If I'm wrong, I'll have to elevate my concept of A.I. But this is (to my ears) so obviously artistic and uniquely original that I wo…
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To be clear. Carroll's song…
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As a member of the forum, I …
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I posted that "Something Wic…
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Not sure exactly what I did to post this in the wrong place. It's an old lyric I wrote 15 years ago about history repeating itself. Carrol's song "History repeats Itself" inspired me to post it. I intended for it to be posted in the "Original …
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I found this to be an excellent lyric. If "those who won't learn history are doomed to repeat it," your song could help avoid "repeating history." BUT. . . alas, mere words will not persuade many people to learn (and learn from) history. Your …
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At a minimum, go into "effec…
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Rob. . . I can hear the incredib…
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The goal of a poem/lyric is to make you feel. THIS ONE MADE ME FEEL. Soooooooo dark and foreboding. Soooooo hopeless. It is (imo) a great lyric.
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I thought this was a truly beautiful song. The vocal was perfect for that very nice, but slightly surprising guitar instrumental. This was one I wished I had written myself. There aren't many like that.
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Do you actually believe that…
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I know you are right, but I …
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They say "keep your eyes on the prize." It would be easy to lose sight of the real "prize" here. The goal is to end up with something worth listening to. Some will disagree. I've had two people here tell me I'm "playing with the devil" becau…
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Ooooopsie..... That's Blues…
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I listened to this elsewhere. It's truly lovely. BTW. . . I'm "Bluesymeditation 8106." How I ended up with that assigned name, I'm entirely unaware. Doesn't matter much to me.
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As the lyric clearly points out, EVERY new technology involves risk. In every new invention or new idea, there are ALWAYS some unintended consequences that we fail to foresee. Sometimes there are intended consequences which are hidden from the p…
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Do you know the definition of an…
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Loved this lyric. . . found an easy way to locate a vocal melody for every part of it. . . but not one in which the parts were all compatible. That's not a negative. It means that there is a complex way to put it together that would sound both…
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Loved the focus on the plucked ukelele. This is the type of song that I don't think anyone will ever be able to program something to write. This is artistically unique in (what I consider) a very positive way. Loved it.
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Liked version 2 better than version 1. I loved the vocal treatment. . . but feel like it could use some of your own artistic vision and I would like it done that way WITH your artistic input better than I liked this. Just one guy's opinion. A…
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Loved the entirety of the song from the lyrics to the instrumental to the prosody between them. I have a question. Is that the A.I. vocal, or is it your vocal, your lyrics, and only the instrumental is from A.I. ???
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I would suggest that you don't g…
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I saw a comment long ago that said, "The first casualty of war is truth. The second casualty of war is the innocence of a generation of young men. Your song brought that back to the front of my mind. This builds beautifully to provide a comple…
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I probably didn't have enough mo…
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