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An interesting post Joseph, with some helpful, interesting information.
The idea of AI being used to write songs is not something I approve of. As you suggest, AI can do a lot of clever things, and the potential is huge, but it can never ha…
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Lovely intro and straight into a classic song. Great words as usual and some fabulous vocal harmonies. It's hard to offer crits for something as well performed/produced as this. Perhaps that's why no-one else has chimed here in so far (!) Great m…
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Your words are always an inspiration. Another fabulous production, but then I'd expect nothing less. Great backing vocals and loving that harmonica. Lovely stuff.😀
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@sidshovel I'm not the best at reviewing lyrics Sid, which is why I often leave it to others on here who know …
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Indeed Sid, peace is a long time coming - too long. Could be about at least 2 mjor conflicts in the world right now, and more. You have a way with words and this says it all.
Away from war, I haven't forgotten about your rock song - I've ju…
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This is really moving Owen. A lovely song. Obviously, I don't know the story behind it but I can use my imagination. Without getting into personal stuff here on the forum, let's just say I can very much relate to this. This is performed in your o…
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First time I've heard this - I think! I can't say that I've ever used Band In a Box but this sounds awesome - I love it. It doesn't matter how you get there, this is great music. Lovely voice and some great guitar work. Keep em comin', I really …
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Could just be me, I'm an older guy, but this comes over as sexist. I can cope with the swearing, if it emphasizes a point rather being there for the sake of it. I can imagine this being a rap or something. I'd be interested to hear where it went …
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A lovely track. I think this could be developed further production-wise. The backing is basic but it works. The thing that gets me about this is that it's really catchy. I enjoyed this one.😀
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Yeah, this is a great track. I like the way it gradually builds. The lyrics come over as being personal but they fit really well. I think I'd like to hear the vocals a little higher in the mix. Otherwise the vocal arrangement is great. Nice to he…
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This is is a really good song to my ears. It has a very 80's synth pop feel to it. If that's what you're after then I'd say you're definitely on the right lines here. The vocals are catchy and well performed. I'd like to hear a more realistic dru…
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Hi Carroll,
I'm unable to get this track to play for some reason. I've tried on 2 different machines and different browsers with no luck. I'll have another look later on tonight or tomorrow.
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Excellent Paulina. Yes, this song has quite an interesting structure...and quite a different subject matter! Nice recording too. I always listening to your songs and this is no exception.😀
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Forgive me, but I want to hear the finished article at this stage. I'm not so good at reviewing lyrics alone so I'll check out the album.😀
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Indeed, looking forward to hearing this. It looks good. I'm not really up on the AI video stuff. I've used AI based software for some backing vocals...that went surprisingly well. I understand peoples' worries though. I wouldn't want to rely on i…
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Work in progress. I've bee…
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Loving that Hammond or whatever it is that sounds like one. We're doing a few blues songs with a live band I play bass for. This is certainly an inspiration. Some great singing and playing going on here. Excellent.😀
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What a wonderful song! I can't suggest anything cos there's nothing to suggest! I love the lyrics to this one and the music is everything I've come to expect. More of the same please!😀
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Sadness, yes, but also a lot of hope I think. This is a nice arrangement and the vocal harmonies work very well. I can actually imagine this being played by a full band turning it into something of an anthem. As it stands it's lovely. I enjoyed l…
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'The bar has been set by majors Chris , its our job to beat them on a limited budget'
Very well put. That's what we must strive to achieve.
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A lovely song. The recording isn't perfect but that doesn't matter here. Yes, I could imagine this with a more elaborate/polished arrangement, but your wife should be really moved by this. It's from the heart and that's what matters, and you sing…
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I'd agree with RDM here. The vibe is good, but I do think it does need a shift somewhere along the way. Nothing raucous but something to grab the attention. Otherwise, yes, I like this song. I'm not a wind junkie, or any other kind of junkie (!) …
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A really sad story. I won't ask the background to this, but it I'm thinking it could make a very moving country ballad. I could be out by a mile saying that, but it's what came to mind as I read. You certainly have a way with words.
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I've said this before, but I sometimes find it hard to offer constructive criticism until I hear words put to music. I think there's others on the forum who are better than me at analyzing lyrics on their own. I hope someone takes on your words.…
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Hard to offer any suggestions/critique when the standard is so high. You are prolific. Another great song.😀
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Aww, the heartbreak here is so real. The words leave me hanging on. I'm not sure how it really ended, but someone could create a fabulous song from these lyrics. Keep em comin' my friend.😀
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A pleasure Katie. It's a…
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All credit to Katie and Owen for this song. They did all the hard work. It was a pleasure to sing it. It's an unusual arrangement which has a late 60's vibe to my ears. The Doors springs to mind. The lyrics have a 60's feel too. I really like the…
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Yes, I'm enjoying the story so far too. I don't know what style of music this will work with as yet, but that may change as you develop it further. Not sure about the structure either, but there's definitely a good song in the making here. Lookin…
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Indeed, this is great. Just looking forward to that album!😀
Howdy, Stranger!