She doesn’t know she’s beautiful

carroll · February 10

She doesn’t know she’s beautiful
Verse
The skies are jealous that her eyes are so blue.
The seas are green with envy.
I’m a pawn, I’m in awe, she’s queen of my dreams.
She is my everything.
Chorus
She doesn’t know, she doesn’t know.
Doesn’t know she’s beautiful.
She doesn’t know she’s beautiful.
verse
She has a smile that embarrasses the sun.
Left me blind in love with her.
The moon hangs her head, and looks the other way.
As if her feelings are hurt.
Chorus
She doesn’t know, she doesn’t know.
Doesn’t know she’s beautiful.
She doesn’t know she’s beautiful.
Bridge
When it rains, she wears a rainbow
Like a halo for a crown.
Like a rainbow, like a rainbow.
Like a halo for a crown.
Chorus
She doesn’t know, she doesn’t know.
Doesn’t know she’s beautiful.
She doesn’t know she’s beautiful.

bhengen · February 10

@carroll - really beautiful sentiment. I was going to write something along these lines, but you beat me to the punch.. :)

sidshovel · February 10

@carroll, nice perspective, I like the way you turn around the angles.

Good use of metaphors to emphasise her beauty, like that touch.

Another good one,

thank you,

Sid

BeatlesFan64 · February 11

Hey @carroll , Nice timing, with Valentine's Day right around the corner. I consider myself the resident hopeless romantic around here so I'm always glad to see stuff like this. I really liked the imagery of verse 2 in particular.

RainyDayMan · February 11

I really like this one! And perfect for Valentine's Day.

Great write.

carroll · February 11

Appreciate all the positive feedback

HummerWisdom · February 11

@carroll Absolutely stunning!! Can't wait to hear the song! Love all of nature that you used so eloquently. Lucky lady, whoever this one was written for.

Renee 💌

carroll · February 11

My wife

She doesn’t know she’s beautiful

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