Reflections of time
had fun with this one...
purely experimental
Lyrics as always by me , vocals / music the glorious AI
https://suno.com/song/6bd80085-e329-4346-af89-edf16de1b9f7
[Verse 1]
time is fleeting
gniteelf si emit
hearts always beating
gnitaeb syawla straeh
[Verse 2]
moments in time never last
tsal reven emit ni stnemom
unless into memory cast
tsac yromem otni sselnu
[Verse 3]
time is linearly progressing
gnissergorp ylraenil si emit
time lost rather distressing
gnissertsid rehtar tsol emit
[Verse 4]
sands of time always dissolving
gnivlossid syawla emit fo sdnas
into new futures always evolving
gnivlove syawla serutuf wen otni
[Verse 5]
time is a steady rivers flow
wolf srevir ydaets a si emit
never stopping always on the go
og eht no syawla gnippots reven
[Verse 6]
moments in time i want back
kcab tnaw I emit ni stnemom
sadly lost unto the black
kcalb eht otnu tsol yldas
[outro]
time is today make each day
count as best as you can
cherish each moment spent
comes as fast as it went
Comments
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I might be a bit backward but, !k*uf eht tahW
I love it, and the song was good too!
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@sidshovel - I thought to myself, if I had alternating lines backwards, how would that sound :) sounds cool :). thanks.
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Keep coming up with novel ideas, this is great. Nothing like breaking the mould of conformity.
I reckon that this is semaphore ready bill, good to go mate!
BTW, love the glorious Ai, race ya to a song.
Sid
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@sidshovel - I already have another one written.. based on gender identity from my perspective.. just have to wait to post it ;)
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I thought: which language is that??😂Very interesting experiment!🤩
A curiosity: which rhythm did you ask to Suno? I liked it very much!0 -
I like the forwards lyrics!
The backwards lines have that "gotcha" factor, but after that I think they lose their value rapidly. Sound alright with the AI melody though.
For an extra challenge, have a different set of lyrics that you read from last line to first line in every alternate line rather than just mirroring the previous one.
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@RainyDayMan - thanks, I agree it does get a bit tedious after a bit. There is another version I’m working where it’s a bit less monotonous0
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Always room in the pantry for more Campbell's Soup Cans!
Have to confess, I don't follow most of this progressive stuff, but I do appreciate the free ticket and enjoy the ride anyway. I find it very stimulating and forces you to look outside your comfort zone.
Thanks for that.
Sid
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@sidshovel - I think I have more of an eclectic musical background than most. i've been following EDM since the 70's when I first heard Kraftwerk. In the mid 70's I came across Emerson Lake and Palmer and was blown away by the musicality, then heard King crimson and again, just the expressive way and freedom they played. the usual rock bands, then when punk came around, again, I was blown away by the raw expressive energy. then new wave, grunge, then when EDM had a resurgance in the 90's I was back in again. I can go from Opera, to classical, Zydeco, metal, punk, disco,, whatever my mood is at the time :)
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Not really my genre , But a cool wacky song man
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@ElvisNash - to be fair, this really has a very limited audience. but thanks for the comment.
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I'm impressed Bill, would you say you are attracted primarily by the sounds irrespective of the lyrics.
You see, I'm the opposite, the words are what get me, early Dylan, Tom Waits, Cohen, etc, less so how they sound.
Interesting.
Sid
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You never know until you build a channel to see what fans like
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@sidshovel - we have different itches to scratch :)... @ElvisNash - yes, I know, just another demon I need to deal with :)
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"different itches to scratch", like it, watch this space.
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🤣😂
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@bhengen Thank you so much!0
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