Portami con te
In ogni
goccia
in ogni
tuono
in ogni
vetro
e in ogni
suono
in ogni sguardo lanciato
e in ogni passo sbandato!
Portami, portami
con te
Nei tuguri
negli alberghi
nei rifugi
gelati
negli assaggi
e nei peccati
nei tamburi
negli archibugi
su navi di vetro
nel grande mare tetro!
portami, portami con te
Nei viaggi
immobili
nelle fermezze
instabili
Negli aeroplani
nei sommergibili
in tutti i fluidi
incomprimibili
nei voli bui delle civette
nelle presenze circospette
Portami, portami con te
Portami!
Portami con te!
portami!
Portami con te
In un granello
sul giradischi
nei libri scemi
e in Dostoevsky
nella bufera
nei documenti
in ogni angustia
e nei fermenti
in un saluto convenzionale
in un sorriso venuto male
portami, portami con te
Sarò presente
nelle tue assenze
nelle intuizioni
nei clarinetti
nelle canzoni
e nei difetti
nelle distanze
nelle assonanze
Nei nascondigli e nelle riscosse
gli scacchi matti fatti in due mosse
portami portami con te
Portami!
Portami con te
portami!
Portami con te
Portami!
Portami con te
portami!
Portami con te
TRANSLATION:
In every
drop
in every
thunder
in every
glass
and in every
sound
in every glance cast
and in every errant step!
Take me, take me
with you
In the hovels
in the hotels
in the frozen
refuges
in the tastings
and in the sins
in the drums
in the arquebuses
on glass ships
in the great dark sea!
take me, take me with you
In the motionless
voyages
in the unstable
firmities
In the airplanes
in the submarines
in all the incompressible
fluids
in the dark flights of the owls
in the wary presences
Take me, take me with you
Take me!
Take me with you!
Take me!
Take me with you
In a grain
on the record player
in the silly books
and in Dostoevsky
in the storm
in the documents
in every anguish
and in the ferments
in a conventional greeting
in a smile gone wrong
take me, take me with you
I will be present
in your absences
in the intuitions
in the clarinets
in the songs
and in the defects
in the distances
in the assonances
In the hiding places and in the recovery
the chessmates made in two moves
take me take me with you
Take me!
Take me with you
take me!
Take me with you
Take me!
Take me with you
take me!
Take me with you
May this song bring you happiness🙏
Comments
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I will leave it to my more poetry minded colleagues to debate the finery of the lyrics and its structure.
Suffice to say, my poor philistine ears, are not the best receptacles for such a fine piece.
I did enjoy it very much though, and look forward to more submissions.
Your work on the translation is appreciated too, Skandha.
Sid
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Is this one AI generated from your lyric Skandha? If so, would you mind making that clear when you post? Thanks
Lovely melodic feel and a superb vocal. I enjoyed that very much.
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@bhengen @sid Thank you very much Guys! I am really grateful for your comments!
@Rainy: Yes you’re right, I wrote it on the video but I did’t in this post: of course I will. Music Made by Suno Lyrics by me. Thank you so much!
I had to choose between lots of attempts, asking “Tango fingerstyle female voice” . (I was sorry to discard a very beautiful song with the same lyrics, but too passionate for the content…)0 -
It’s a nice and „simple“ one, I like it.0
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Lovely song, @Skandha and captivating video to go along with it.
Enjoy your material very much,
Renee 💌
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Thank you so much Renee!🙏I really appreciate your comment.1
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Thank you Rainbow, I’m really glad you like it!🤗🙏0
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@Skandha meant to ask you, did you appear in your video? And I really didn't give you enough credit on your lyric: BRILLIANT!
Renee
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Hi Renee, you are very kind with my lyrics. It all comes from my buddhist faith. With regard to the video I’m not there, and I’m not so good-looking😂. I just took some free videos from website like Pexels and similar, and mixed them.
Thank you again for your kindness!!🤗1 -
@Skandha Thank you for answering my question: you an' me both, 'not so good-looking' (these days) as I age, ugh!! But it is what it is and it was what it was! Had my glory-days! Now, it's someone else's turn! 😍
Kindly,
Renee
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