Lontana
Scrive lui scrive ma
senza la musica
le sue parole no
non sono niente
umili zombie
senza corrente
ma in un accordo
si sollevano
così
Lontana è l’ amata
oppure è vicina
o è nella luce
di questa collina
Mi chiama a danzare
nel suo temporale
e fremono foglie
in complicità
Che le raccolga
chi si è distratto
chi si è perduto
e legga a un tratto
restando muto
nei sottopassi
di questo inverno
pieno di sassi
Lontana è l’ amata
eppure la sento
lei soffia nel vento
sull’alba gelata
Sono i suoi occhi
le luci che vedo
e fremono i tetti
di questa città
Lontana è l’ amata
oppure è vicina
o è nella luce
di questa collina
Mi chiama a danzare
nel suo temporale
e fremono foglie
in complicità
ENGLISH VERSION:
He writes he writes but
without the music
his words oh no
they are nothing
humble zombies
without power
but in an chord
they rise
like this
The beloved is far away
or it's close
or it is in the light of this hill
She calls me to dance
in her storm
and leaves tremble
in complicity
Let him collect them
him who got distracted
who lost himself
and read suddenly
remaining silent
in the underpasses
of this winter
full of rocks
The beloved is far away
yet I feel her
she blows in the wind
on the frozen dawn
They are her eyes
the lights I see
and the roofs tremble
of this city
The beloved is far away
or it's close
or it is in the light
of this hill
She calls me to dance
in her storm
and leaves tremble
in complicity
LYRICS:me
DRUMS INTRO:me
STRINGS: me
MUSIC: Suno (I mixed 4 different songs made by AI)
Comments
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That is cool, loved the Argentine Tango, good to have something different on the forum,
Well done you, hope to hear some more.
Sid
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Thank you so much Sid☺️🙏0
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@Skandha Thank God for the English version, LOL! 😍 Just lovely....Love the start of your video with the slow motion dancing; black and white and coming in with color and real speed. Love the whole video as well as the song and what a beautiful ballerina!
Wonderful to make your acquaintance,
Renee
PS: Sorry about taking up so much space; I copied my comment from Youtube with that #1and it appeared here; tried to edit/delete and no can do.
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I enjoyed this, the beat took me to a way better place than I had been most of the morning. I didn't understand a word of it, but I didn't need to.
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That was very pleasant to listen to!
So is the lyric about someone writing lyrics and seeking music for them? If so that feels very self-referential.
It has a lovely poetic feel to it (and probably more so in the original Italian!)
Well done!
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@Renee @Barry Thank you very much guys for your kindness!🙏
@Rainy Yes you’re right, that’s one of the themes of the lyrics. Thank you so much for the comment!🤗1 -
Thank you so much Bhengen! 🤗0
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