So I wrote this song

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[verse 1]
All the thoughts in my head,
the things I want to say.
When, I look into your eyes,
they go, they run away.
[verse 2]
It's everythin' about ya,
causes my mind to spin.
Can't think straight,
feel I just can't win.
[chorus]
Together, I don't know what to do,
few things right, mostly wrong
Struggle to say, I love you
So I wrote this song
[verse 3]
I want to tell you,
what's inside of me.
Screamin' to get out,
I need you to see.
[chorus]
Together, I don't know what to do,
few things right, mostly wrong
Struggle to say, I love you
So I wrote this song
[verse 4]
Look at the selfie, you gave me,
an' the words, flow like rain.
write, before they run away,
an' don't, come back again.
[bridge]
It's there, before my eyes.
each word, I want to say.
A song torn from my heart,
I pray, I'll sing to you, one day.
[final hook]
Together, I don't know what to do,
few things right, mostly wrong.
Struggle to say, I love you,
So I wrote this song.
[outro]
For you, I learnt to play guitar,
listen to my song, where you are.
Hear the words, too shy to say,
an' you'll come back , one day.
Comments
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this has a great melody. i think most people can relate :)
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Ai did a great job on the music here.
Overall it's a really singable number. I can imagine teenage girls going off about it were it sung by a heartthrob.
Nicely done.
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Thank you, but I have no intention of singing it
Sid
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It’s really well done, and nice to listen to. Very good voice. Maybe, if I have to find some suggestion, chords are too predictable.
Thank you🙏
Skandha0 -
This is a special song Sid, really like this one a lot!
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Really sweet lyrics, Sid. This would’ve been HUGE if it came out in the mid 2000s. It gives major “hey there Delilah” and “somewhere only we know” energy. Even gave me a bit of a nostalgia trip. Overall, this one turned out great.1
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Another great write, Sid! everything comes together nicely. The bridge is my favorite part.
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Thanks Toney,
I value your comments and advice highly.
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