When I’ll see
I’m an italian lyricist; I used AI to create this over my lyrics. Hope you enjoy.
https://youtu.be/wRQyPk6uGBY?si=LLa_fE7BZM7NGzuO
Lyrics:
When I’ll stop
believing in the world
When I’ll stop seeing
its relentless wheels
When I’ll stop believing
the deceptions of sounds
and When everything will appear to me
like a rainbow
I will start to see
only your face
when I’ll see only you
when I’ll see only you
when I’ll see only you
in every atom of my body
When i’ll see
only your divine multitude
When I’ll stop
believing in the world
When I’ll stop seeing
its relentless karma
when I’ll see only you
when I’ll see only you
when I’ll see only you
in every atom of my body
When i’ll see
only your divine multitude
When i’ll see
beyond the veils of sensory objects your face appears unchallenged, and everything, illusory, revolves around your seed syllable like millions of luminous mantras, emaho!
When I’ll see..
…the book is made of letters, the letters are empty of meaning, do not believe the book but only its love story; the cyclone is made of nothing, it can destroy nothing but nothing; the universe has got a center a secret center, that only real alchemists will discover!
beyond the veils of sensory objects your face appears unchallenged, and everything, illusory, revolves around your seed syllable like millions of luminous mantras, emaho!
Comments
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Welcome to the forum Skandha,
With the exception of the narration near the end, this is a very presentable song. Generally speaking. I don't find narration works in any song, and in this case using Ai only causes the vocals to be hurried to fit into the app's time limit. I can't say I understand the message/theme of the song, but it sounds pleasant enough.
You may also want to consider formatting your lyrics into a style more familiar to the rest. If you're not sure how to do this, there are some useful resources to help you on this forum.
Well done, look forward to hearing more of your work.
Sid
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Thank you very much Sid! I appreciate your suggestion.
The theme is devotion to a buddhist deity.
(I have made beginning strings and cut two different songs made by Suno and put into one)
Thank you again🙏0 -
Hi Skandha,
thanks for helping me grasp the theme.
Here's a very good link to help you prompt Suno better.
https://www.wokewaves.com/posts/suno-ai-guide-tips-tricks-prompts
Sid
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You've got a unique style going here, both lyrically and (via the AI) musically.
I enjoyed it, but I don't really know how to help you with it.
The repetition on "When I see only you" gives the song structure and makes it work. Without that it may not come off as well.
Look forward to seeing / hearing more of your work.
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Hi Sid and Rainy,
Thank you.
I will study that suggestions for Suno
Thank you for listening and for your time!!0
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