Sad Sack

Since a some of you wanted to hear one of my previous songs backed up by more music, I decided to use a backing track from YouTube on the the following. I feel this lyric needs more work...like landing on some positive note, but here goes.. and keeping in mind, backing tracks generally are limiting in regard to chord progressions but in my case that's probably a good thing!
For a listen ===> https://soundcloud.com/reneelachapelle/sad-sack
Backing Track by JamTracksChannel, YouTube
SAD SACK
[Verse 1]
If not for my hound dog, Lucy
I’d stay in bed all weekend long
Lucy’s brown eyes never lie
She’s happy to be in my song
I keep promising myself
One of these blankety days
I’ll put my heart back out there
But I’m stuck in my ways
[Chorus]
I’m a sad sack
Sad as any sack can be
Got no one to love
No one loves me
If I’d known ahead ‘a time
This is how my life would go
I would’ve held onto you
Like no time left to borrow
[Verse 2]
Finally, got out of the house
Walking Lucy at the strip mall
A cloudy December day
Scurrying before more rain falls
An older couple up ahead
They’re walking hand in hand
How I ended up a lone wolf
Just the blue heron could understand
[Chorus]
I’m a sad sack
Sad as any sack can be
Got no one to love
No one loves me
If I’d known ahead ‘a time
This is how my life would go
I would’ve held onto you
Like no time left to borrow
[Instrumental]
[Chorus]
I’m a sad sack
Sad as any sack can be
Got no one to love
No one loves me
If I’d known ahead ‘a time
This is how my life would go
I would’ve held onto you
Like no time left to borrow, yeh
[Tag]
If I’d known ahead ‘a time
This is how my life would go
I would’ve held onto you
Like no time left to borrow..
© 2025 Renee La Chapelle – All Rights Reserved
Comments
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There ya go Renee! I'm loving this one, ya had me oooooo oooooing along.
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@Barry happy to oblige! 😍
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@HummerWisdom - This would make a great blue song it has all the tenets :).. really enjoyed it
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I’m a sad sack
Sad as any sack can be
I think that works very well.
It's probably better to have some upbeat music, as you have it, than something morose, might have brought it down too much.
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Good one, Renee, catchy chords and melody, and I agree with RDM, with lyrics like this, it’s nice to have a super upbeat track so that it balances out a bit. I also love how you have those enthusiastic oohs in a lot of your songs. It’s like your trademark haha.1
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