The dance of the penguins V2
Re-worked it a bit..
https://suno.com/song/6699a2cf-09d1-459a-a522-9ee387e7548f
[Verse 1]
Raging waves crash against the shore,
As once white clouds, now turn black
After angry words, the penguins part
And fade away, never looking back
[Verse 2]
Turbulent waters slowly grow calm,
As emotion recede with the tide
And the penguins now in meditation,
Realize how hurtful words, can divide
[Chorus]
Mystical is the dance of the penguins
Like the seas' gentle ebb and flow
Circular rhythms of grace and balance
Harmonious in the moonlight's glow
[Bridge]
Season change with time passages,
Their hearts are so far and away,
Though wasted days and wasted nights,
They knew they'd meet again, someday
[Verse 3]
A chance meeting on a wintery day,
Fresh tracks and a scent in the air,
A familiar sight on the waters edge,
Yin and yang, now a complete pair
[Verse 4]
Dance they dance, like never before,
Swirling colors of black and white
Harmoniously intertwined as one,
A Natural balance of dark and light
[Chorus]
Mystical is the dance of the penguins
Like the seas' gentle ebb and flow
Circular rhythms of grace and balance
Harmonious in the moonlight's glow
Comments
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I liked the lyric and the overall song. I've been tinkering with A.I. myself and am (somewhat surprisingly) learning a lot about my own songwriting process from doing so. I'm assuming this is your lyric, and Suno A.I. wrote the music? Interestingly enough, Years and years ago I wrote an instrumental called "The Penguin's Ballet." Had to listen to this one because of the correlation between the titles.
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@Hardtwistmusic - thanks.. yes, these are my lyrics... I got the idea from the yin and yang symbol. then thought of penguins because of their color.. originally it was called the march of the penguins..
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This is too cool, really liking the writing
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@Hardtwistmusic - thanks barry..
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It could fit in a animal show BBC
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Whenever I'm in Australia, I make a point of visiting Phillip Island, near Melbourne. It has a penguin sanctuary there. Every night thousands of penguins leave the water and walk over the beach to reach their nesting grounds in the nearby dunes. It's possible to walk alongside them in the dunes, an amazing experience, I never tire of.
With those thoughts in my mind, I pressed the play button, what a contrast! Your song blew me away, the complete opposite of the serene waddle of my memories. And yet, once again, for some reason, it worked!
The words drew you in and the music blew you away, well done, I loved it.
Sid
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@sidshovel - Sid, that would be amazing to be able to do that.. here's the entire thought process to this song.. I wanted to write a silly song about penguins marching. then I started reading about Taoism and the color of the penguins reminded me of the yin/yang symbol. Then I thought about harmony/disharmony and what is more harmonious / disharmonious than a relationship. so the penguins argue, break up then get back together.. :)
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Oh, you got that right! Relationships are harmonious / disharmonious. Your song captured that beautifully.
You write as you see/feel and that comes across in your work. Don't change, it sets you apart.
Sid
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@sidshovel thanks sid,
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