The Raven

https://suno.com/song/571ad367-b852-4cdb-8c4b-6c9d43e8bdd7


loosely based on the poem be edgar allan poe - The Raven

I moved it to the 40's


[Verse 1]

Twelve chimes of the clock as smoke fills the air

Pondering of forgotten lore, while resting in my chair

As I nodded, a glass of bourbon falls to the floor

Suddenly there is a gentle rapping at my chamber door


[Verse 2]

Thoughts of Lenore, as I stumble to the door,

Looking down, I see a calling card on my floor

Black with two words written in white bold,

Quoth The Raven - Nevermore, leaves me cold


[Chorus]

Known only as the Raven, a figure in black

Sharp as a blade and quick to attack

A calling card left at your door, beware

Your best friend or worst nightmare


[Verse 3]

Back into the chamber, I spin, my soul burning

To the window I race, my mind churning

A figure in black into the alley fades

As I peer hidden behind my window shades


[Verse 4]

Grabbing onto the silken purple curtains

Trembling with fear, my fate now certain

Wasn't a typical visit at my chamber door, 

'Twas from the raven, quoth - Nevermore


[Chorus]

Known only as the Raven, a figure in black

Sharp as a blade and quick to attack

A calling card left at your door, beware

Your best friend or worst nightmare


[verse 5]

Lenore and I was partner till she met the boss

His name is Tony, one you don't want to cross

They met at the nightclub, she works the floor,

Again, I hear a rapping at my chamber door


[Verse 6]

From my desk, I quickly pull my revolver, 

Cocked and ready to fire, until I heard her,

It was Lenore, gently rapping at my chamber door

Please let me in, in desperation she implores


[Chorus]

Known only as the Raven, a figure in black

Sharp as a blade and quick to attack

A calling card left at your door, beware

Your best friend or worst nightmare


[Verse 7]

As I stand there, shaking, my fate I'm facing

My palms become sweaty, my mind racing

Quickly, I fling open my chamber door

A single shot rings out, I fall to the floor


[Verse 8]

Lenore smiles wickedly, Tony sends his love

Around her neck, my gift, a golden dove

And as I lay lifeless on the floor,

Quoth the Raven, - Nevermore, Nevermore

Comments

  • ElvisNash
    ElvisNash Calif
    edited January 2025

    Sounds really good , has that old time swing stuff . pretty amazing AI can get all the horns and stuff . mix it in 2 seconds , Normal mixes take 5 hours or more with a trained ear . With all that going on it might take 12 hours

  • @ElvisNash thanks.. turned out better than expected.. still need to work on the lyrics..

  • its a bit formal lyrically on ravens I guess . Up in the air like all opinions

  • @ElvisNash - kept to close to the original poem.. this would have sounded better if it was sung by the andrew sisters, but I couldn't get sonu to do more than one female vocal.. i'm sure I'm not prompting correctly

  • Yeah poems , that's why , I've been brow beaten to keep things conversational. Tell Dylan that lol


    Prompting is probably difficult . Maybe they have a tutorial on Suno

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