The Raven
https://suno.com/song/571ad367-b852-4cdb-8c4b-6c9d43e8bdd7
loosely based on the poem be edgar allan poe - The Raven
I moved it to the 40's
[Verse 1]
Twelve chimes of the clock as smoke fills the air
Pondering of forgotten lore, while resting in my chair
As I nodded, a glass of bourbon falls to the floor
Suddenly there is a gentle rapping at my chamber door
[Verse 2]
Thoughts of Lenore, as I stumble to the door,
Looking down, I see a calling card on my floor
Black with two words written in white bold,
Quoth The Raven - Nevermore, leaves me cold
[Chorus]
Known only as the Raven, a figure in black
Sharp as a blade and quick to attack
A calling card left at your door, beware
Your best friend or worst nightmare
[Verse 3]
Back into the chamber, I spin, my soul burning
To the window I race, my mind churning
A figure in black into the alley fades
As I peer hidden behind my window shades
[Verse 4]
Grabbing onto the silken purple curtains
Trembling with fear, my fate now certain
Wasn't a typical visit at my chamber door,
'Twas from the raven, quoth - Nevermore
[Chorus]
Known only as the Raven, a figure in black
Sharp as a blade and quick to attack
A calling card left at your door, beware
Your best friend or worst nightmare
[verse 5]
Lenore and I was partner till she met the boss
His name is Tony, one you don't want to cross
They met at the nightclub, she works the floor,
Again, I hear a rapping at my chamber door
[Verse 6]
From my desk, I quickly pull my revolver,
Cocked and ready to fire, until I heard her,
It was Lenore, gently rapping at my chamber door
Please let me in, in desperation she implores
[Chorus]
Known only as the Raven, a figure in black
Sharp as a blade and quick to attack
A calling card left at your door, beware
Your best friend or worst nightmare
[Verse 7]
As I stand there, shaking, my fate I'm facing
My palms become sweaty, my mind racing
Quickly, I fling open my chamber door
A single shot rings out, I fall to the floor
[Verse 8]
Lenore smiles wickedly, Tony sends his love
Around her neck, my gift, a golden dove
And as I lay lifeless on the floor,
Quoth the Raven, - Nevermore, Nevermore
Comments
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Sounds really good , has that old time swing stuff . pretty amazing AI can get all the horns and stuff . mix it in 2 seconds , Normal mixes take 5 hours or more with a trained ear . With all that going on it might take 12 hours
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@ElvisNash thanks.. turned out better than expected.. still need to work on the lyrics..
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its a bit formal lyrically on ravens I guess . Up in the air like all opinions
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@ElvisNash - kept to close to the original poem.. this would have sounded better if it was sung by the andrew sisters, but I couldn't get sonu to do more than one female vocal.. i'm sure I'm not prompting correctly
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Yeah poems , that's why , I've been brow beaten to keep things conversational. Tell Dylan that lol
Prompting is probably difficult . Maybe they have a tutorial on Suno
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