Chemicals
Hi
Here is a new song i have done , the lyrics are a bit repetitive
i have tried to do it i a Pop Trippy style
https://soundcloud.com/subvibe-958077223/chemicals
Thanks for taking the time to listen
subvibe
Comments
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Friendly advice,
Please post lyrics for feedback.
Sid
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Did you write the melody, music and lyrics? Is that you singing? Would like to know more about what parts come from you.
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Hi @mattyoung
i didn't write the Lyrics & didn't sing the vocals
everything else i did
regards
subvibe
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So you wrote and performed the music? Then you've done the strongest part of the song!
The vocal sound is a good fit to the feel of the song though the lyric itself might be a little repetitive. But even that is probably appropriate to the style of the song.
You definitely succeeded in getting that Pop Trippy vibe!
AI generated lyric+vocal with your own music is perfectly acceptable on TSF, though a fully AI generated song would not not be.
And as Sid mentioned, if you wanted comments on the lyric, then it's best to include that here on TSF, but in this case that may not be as relevant.
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Hi @RainyDayMan
many thanks for listening & your comments
FYI the vocals are not AI generated . on the previous TSF i posted many songs mainly in RnB & chilled style
this song was just to try something different
regards
subvibe
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I don't have you down as an AI musician. Curious to know who/how the vocals were created. Whatever, this is another classy piece as I've come to expect from you. Great production and I'd say very commercial.😀
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