Day Trip
A pretty literal tale about leaving the cornfields of Illinois, visiting a dear friend in Colorado and wandering through the mountainous back-country whilst eating the kinds of mushrooms your mother never used to put in the spaghetti sauce.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oG6rbE0x1x4
Day Trip
When I was young and I needed change
I'd take a trip to a mountain range
And once, I never came back again
I'll see a friend there
I won't pretend there
I'll clear my head and shake the dread of everyday despair
So, fill the car up with gasoline
There's a long stretch of road and some long states in-between
Relieved it's only make-believe
It takes its toll on you
All told, the things you behold
Can help to see you through
While he was climbing a ragged tree
The earth had sloped and surrounded me
The wind moved the two places into one
We get up and go
We find a plateau
And I unfurled into a world of everything aglow
How the mind feels breaking through
When you least expect it to
Relieved it's only make-believe
It takes its toll on you
All told, the things you behold
Can help to see you through
We're bombing down rocky mountainsides
Each jump a flight that our speed provides
Below, shifting swarms of pebbled lanes
We find a stream and with heads still dreaming
I find a stone lying alone under the water gleaming
Now it's a lifetime talisman
I never had a master plan
Relieved it's only make-believe
It takes its toll on you
All told, the things you behold
Can help to see you through
Comments
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oooowow what a trip! Love the traveling feel of the song. Wish I could tag along. Great music very catchy. And the visuals...how you do dat chit??
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Nice song! good trip!!! Nice arrangement, vocals, story and vid!!!
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Good song, Matt! The lyrics are well-written and the vocals, arrangement, and music are enjoyable. Nice job!
Cheers,
Joseph
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This is fabulous. Very 1960's if you don't mind me saying. Loving the piano..that really works. Great singing too. A really cheery song and very well constructed. I nearly forgot - the drums sound spot on too. I thoroughly enjoyed this.😀
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Thanks for listening and for the kind words, everyone. I was worried about this one being too repetitive without a bridge, but never did find one that worked. So I'm pleased that first impressions are positive.
@StoneFlowers - video editing is my day job, so I did this one over a couple lunch breaks!
@ChrisPrice - I don't mind the '60s description at all. It's pretty evident in most of my songs, though never ever intentional,0 -
Great riff on the piano very funky. I like the backing vocals. It's very catchy. Nice one.
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