Catholic Whiskey

This was a very interesting song writing endeavor. I was raised Catholic but this ironic dichotomy, (Catholic Whiskey), has never crossed my mind before.
Thank all of you who had suggestions on this song. I was able to incorporate many of them…
Catholic Whiskey—whiskey made in predominately Catholic, Southern Ireland, in particular the Jameson’s brand.
My daddy was a drunk
His dad and his brothers too
If hell fire could be guzzled down
That’s where they’ll all be found
Off to confession my mother cried
And tell the priest your sins
Or the devil soon will live within
As a child I wondered why
But she knew the day was coming
Drink would spill in a spinning room
The family curse was waiting
To take me for a fool
I’ll be good I promised her
I’ll pray what needs be said
But I stumbled short of heaven’s key
And drowned in the curse in Catholic whiskey
In the mirror a distorted a face
In the light it’s clear to trace
A look the drunk can’t see
Blind by the curse of Catholic whiskey
Break
Ah the cold holy water be blessed
But the whiskey makes me warmer
I’ll bless the burn as it goes down
To where my soul be found
Off to confession now I’ll wobble
Tell my sins to the face on the bottle
Clutch the glass like rosary beads
Let the drink set me free
She knew the day was coming
Drink would spill and the room would spin
Now I pray for a better day
With a shot of Jameson’s
I’ll be good I promised her
I’ll pray what needs be said
But the saving light I couldn’t see
Blind by the curse in Catholic whiskey
Comments
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Great work. No notes!
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Thanks, did you want to see the chords?
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@StoneFlowers No, I meant "no notes" as in "I don't have any suggestions to offer that I think you should try/change in this song!"0
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Very good piece, enjoyed that very much.
"And drowned in the curse in Catholic whiskey"
I'd probably change the second "in" to "of"
Well done
Sid
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Great story driven song! I like 'Catholic whiskey', I haven't seen that used before.
The rhyming scheme in the verse doesn't work for me, though it may well do for others. I found myself wanting the 2nd+4th lines to rhyme, that seemed to be where the emphasis was.
Like the melody and the guitar work.
Enjoyed my listen!
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Like a movie plenty of heavy scenes, even being wrapped in irony! @StoneFlowers
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Fabulous song. Great lyrics - great vocal and I love the acoustic guitar. I wish I was brave enough to do it that way. I really enjoyed this.😀
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Thanks for your kind words Chris. And thanks for your comments everyone. Unfortunately last night I bought a bottle of Jamesons to get a "hands on feel" for the concept of Catholic Whiskey. It's a good thing I wrote the song first...cuz now my head don't think or feel so good.
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When I was much younger I had, shall we say, a rather unfortunate experience with a bottle of Johnny Walker!! Suffice to say I've never touched whiskey since!!
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