Original song - Everything goes around
Another original song right "off the presses":
https://gloriousmagicalfields.bandcamp.com/track/everything-goes-around
Lyrics:
It's 5 am
And I'm on a midnight flight
When I'm on the ground
Everything is going to be all right
I don't want tell you how to live your life
Because
Everything goes around, around, around, around
Because
Everything goes around, around, around
Because
Everything goes around, around, around
It's 5 am
And I'm on a midnight flight
When I'm on the ground
Everything is going to be all right
I don't want tell you how to live your life
Because
Everything goes around, around, around, around
Because
Everything goes around, around, around
Because
Everything goes around, around, around
It's 5 am
And I'm on a midnight flight
When I'm on the ground
Everything is going to be all right
I don't want tell you how to live your life
Because
Everything goes around, around, around, around
Because
Everything goes around, around, around
Because
Everything goes around, around, around
Comments
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Lovely guitar work as always. That intro got me right in.
I'd like to hear a little more melodic variation in the chorus, it's largely in a narrow range right now.
The lyric doesn't really grab me. It feels like I'm watching someone from a distance and there's nothing that draws me in an makes me care about them.
But the mood and atmosphere is all there, and the music is strong.
Don't forget to leave feedback for others as well - 2 comments for each song you post yourself.
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Thank you for listening and opinions. This is juts a sketch of a song. When I get the condenser microphone I will create full length well produced songs.
I have listened to songs by others however there aren't too many these days! It seems most people are only interested in lyrics. That's ok but it's not music.
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Gawwwd, your vocals are so mysteriously beautiful. And the guitar work just adds tension to the mystery. Great unique stuff buddy.
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A different style, Very daring in its creation and performance, electric guitar, oz with FX and the story that becomes a loop.
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Thank you for listening and your kind, encouraging comments. This was just a quick attempt to "squeeze" a little happiness into my life with what little time I have available right now. I will be getting a better microphone and creating some longer and more complete pieces in the future.
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