A Mariners Tale - Lyrics
Here is a new one! Yes, I like to tell stories throughout my songs. Stories that resonate and may give a glimpse of history and lives long gone. Some of them are maritime themed stories. Maybe to keep them resp. their memories alive and mostly because they are worth telling...
Just recently I stumbled across the story of the SS Bannockburn, a steel hull freighter, that was lost without a trace in a winter storm on Lake Superior, and the mystery that have surrounded its disappearance ever since. She still has not been found (yet). This song is the result. Have fun!
And a shout-out to Dan Hall, Carl Behrend, Lee Murdock, Gordon Lightfoot and for sure the great Stan Rodgers, for keeping the memories of those alive, who perished whilst doing their duty throughout the centuries on the great lakes. Those singer/songwriters are a huge inspiration for me...
I'll upload the song shortly, when I'm done editing on audacity...
A Mariner’s Tale
by Sporty
Let me tell you the story 'bout a skipper and his crew
That went down with their ship in a gale
You might have heard it before from the few
that returned as a mariner's tale
The Bannockburn was a mighty good ship
when she steamed through the lakes in her time
Her hull full of grain, when she made her last trip
They thought the profit she’ll make would be fine
(Bridge)
Her Captain was named the old George R. Wood
a bunch of young men was his crew
like a rock on the bridge at the wheel he stood
The year was nineteen-o’-two
(Refrain 1)
The Bannockburn she went down that night
and the flying Dutchman appeared
The Bannockburn just vanished from sight
As the flying Dutchman she’s feared
She left Fort William from Thunder Bay
To reach the opposite shore
But fate determined that stormy day
That she will go down with a roar
No one really knows what happened that night
when the Bannockburn met her sad end
she might struck the reefs near Stannard Rock Light
but there was no distress signal sent
(Bridge)
But since that night she's been sighted again
to ships in the claws of a storm
To help the poor sailors in their raging pain
ant their vessels not to get torn
(Refrain 2)
The Bannockburn she just disappeared
Captain Wood through the sea he still rakes
The Bannockburn to the bottom he steered
the flying Dutchman of the great lakes
now how do i know this you lads may ask
This sounds too absurd to be true
I was the first mate on the Hitchinson
and I was part of their crew
One foggy night we almost sank
too close to an unknown reef
When suddenly a ship submerged
i know it is hard to believe
(Bridge)
from those dangerous shallows she steered us away
instead of us hit the rocks of that bay
and as she faded in the fog i saw in the maze
captain Woods grin on his face
now pour me another glass my friends
telling stories makes my throat dry
but this is how my story ends
a last drink and a final goodbye
(Refrain 2)
The Bannockburn she just disappeared
Captain Wood through the sea he still rakes
The Bannockburn to the bottom he steered
The flying Dutchman of the great lakes
The flying Dutchman of the great lakes
Comments
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A rollicking sailing story! Has the feel of a sea shanty, or perhaps a Lakes shanty in this case! 😉
Couple of suggestions:
a bunch of young men was his crew -> a bunch of young men were his crew (unless you want him to have poor grammar for his sailor persona)
she might struck -> she might've struck (though I suspect you wouldn't hear the difference when sung)
"instead of us hit the rocks of that bay" it probably ought to be "instead of us hitting the rocks of that bay" BUT that might change how it's sung, and how it sounds is always more important to me than how it reads.
Also, pls take a moment to check out our posting guidelines: https://www.thesongwritersforum.com/vanilla/discussion/8/posting-a-song
Specifically, I'd ask you to post only 1 song per day, and to comment/review on 2 other songs for each one you post yourself.
I'd also suggest waiting until you have the recording uploaded if it's already on its way. That way you can keep all the feedback together in the one place.
Thanks!
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Hi @StefPo ,
Your works are so cool, and your stories are quite original.
A Mariner has plenty of adventure and romance tales, and the Mariner has a lot to say!
Thanks for sharing your stories and verses from the sea!!!
Rene
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Thx Dan and Rene, appreciate your comments very much. Especially for the grammar corrections...:-)
Should have read the posting guidlines in advance, sorry for that.
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No problem! BTW my name isn't Dan. I go by Owen, RainyDayMan or RDM- just so you know! 😉
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Good lyrics about an interesting subject. You mentioned Gordon Lightfoot as a source of musical inspiration. I remember and still like five or six of his songs from the 70s. Good stuff!
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