🅰️Warm eyes hide a cold heart
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Bit of a change of pace
[intro]
[verse 1]
I'm in a bar, thinkin' on, ways to blame my wife,
adultery by her, would stop the court twistin' the knife.
A stunner sat down beside me, ordered a whiskey high,
reminded me of Betty Davis, those wide allurin' eyes.
[verse 2]
Later, we went back to my room, stayin' at the Hilton,
Shared pleasures of our bodies, you left the light on.
Heard a camera shutter, a shrill laugh and the words "tut, tut,"
got out of bed in time, to see the room door shut.
[chorus]
Somethin' about her eyes, showed no fear at all,
voice was calm, too calm, as if she was playin' a part.
Her touch was cold, I waited for the other shoe to fall,
the smile, a sneer, warm eyes that hid a cold heart.
[verse 3]
Weeks passed slowly, Bette Davis fell off the radar.
Little did I know, she hadn't gone that far.
Got an envelope in the mail, from some lawyer,
divorce papers, and pictures of me and her.
[chorus]
Somethin' about her eyes, showed no fear at all,
voice was calm, too calm, as if she was playin' a part.
Her touch was cold, I waited for the other shoe to fall,
the smile, a sneer, warm eyes that hid a cold heart.
[verse 4]
The judge looked me up and down in disgust,
pictures in her hand, proof of infidelity and lust.
At the back of the court, my wife was kissed,
by a lady I knew well, the elusive Miss Davis.
[chorus]
Somethin' about her eyes, showed no fear at all,
voice was calm, too calm, as if she was playin' a part.
Her touch was cold, I waited for the other shoe to fall,
the smile, a sneer, warm eyes that hid a cold heart.
[bridge]
Don't ever think you really know someone,
what they think and what they'll do.
As you make your plans to bring 'em down,
they will have done the same to you.
[chorus]
Somethin' about her eyes, showed no fear at all,
voice was calm, too calm, as if she was playin' a part.
Her touch was cold, I waited for the other shoe to fall,
the smile, a sneer, warm eyes that hid a cold heart.
[outro]
warm eyes that hid a cold heart.
warm eyes that hid a cold heart.
Comments
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Oh. I thought it was your own original music at first, I was like Wow! Sounds like Rod Stewart. Now I say "Why do that? I think you're why better off creating and recording your own stuff.".
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Thank you Rob, I like to hear my lyrics set to music/vocals to appreciate if the lyrics work. It helps improve my lyric writing. I use Ai since I don't play musical instruments or have a voice remotely melodic.
Quite a few people mentioned that they can only judge lyrics if set to music, so I provide the option should they wish to use it.
I have never, or ever, wish to claim any credit for the Ai accompaniment, it is provided for others purely as a voluntary option only.
Thank you for your feedback
Sid
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Really impressed!!! Great great one!!! @sidshovel
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Thank you Mora, whole-heartedly for listening and commenting.
I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Gracias
Sid
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That makes sense. I'm not so much lyrically inclined but I think through this forum I am becoming more so and can the results.
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That Bitch! As you make your plans to bring 'em down, they will have done the same to you...Great story Sid
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You're welcome SF.
Glad you enjoyed it.
I have a CW showcase planned for next week. If you liked this one you're gonna love
"Au Revoir to Adios" next Wednesday.
Stay tuned
Sid
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That's some storyline! And a lesson for us all. I'm not sure there's anyone there to like though!
"warm eyes that hid a cold heart" is a great hook and title.
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Thank you,
I like to anchor my stories in reality, very few divorces have likeable characters in the end!
Sid
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In the spirit of RDM's thread in discussions, and my follow up to it, here's my take on this one. Divorce? I somehow managed to avoid that one though the poor woman deserves a medal! The title to this one does it for me. It says it all.
You have a way with words that I can't match Sid. I've told stories about heartbreak and the evil ways of certain ladies. You tell it like it's serious. I can't do that. A great lyric.
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