Fell Down Hard
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I like this track, though I think it could use a shift in direction mid-way as it's a bit one dimensional as it stands. It would be useful if you could post the lyrics too. In my humble opinion this is a good song which deserves some more work to bring it alive.😀
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Do you have the option to add extra tracks like bass and drums, Joe? This feels like one that could use a full ensemble mix to build it out. A guitar solo would likely fit nicely too.
My other suggestion would be an extra part really focusing on the 'fell down hard' line and really sing that out lingering on 'hard' with maybe a high note there. Hammer home that hook!! 😁
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Very nice strumming technique.
Your vocals is easy to the ear, and the melody is quite catchy!!!
Lyrics would be nice, agree with Chris!
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