She Walks in Beauty in the Night (early demo)

This is an early demo of my new song "She Walks in Beauty in the Night". The lyrics below are in flux and the vocals are a first take. I'm working more on the demo, recording new vocals, adding some fills, and making a video in time for Halloween, but hopefully sooner. I programmed the Ample Guitar LP electric guitar VST3 as the main guitar on the track, and added the powerdrumkit VST3 that Chris mentioned to augment my existing drum track. I may also solicit an engineer from an online gig site to help improve the mix EQ on my next demo.

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She Walks in Beauty in the Night
Words and Music: Joseph Spain
Produced by: Joseph Spain
© 2024 Joseph Spain
song from my forthcoming fictional horror novel "Omega's Dark: The Transference"

--Verse 1
I know it's no secret
To anyone who knows me that I love this girl
She's a sorceress
With darkness in her soul

--Verse 2
She gets to my heart with kisses
Her way with words
The scent of her skin and her sweet charms
She's the lightnin' in the storm

--Pre-chorus 1
Her dark hair spills one hand past shoulders length
and shines in full moonlight
When the sun has set 
And twilight turns to night she comes alive

--Chorus
No power or god will matter
No force on earth
Once Hedra's mind is made
The wicked lives will shatter
And when her will is done
There's hell to pay
It's much too late for sorry
Her blood moon's in the sky
And she walks in beauty in the night

--Verse 3
I'm mortal man of flesh
Not sand or stone
My heart and bones are hers to take
She's the one inside my soul, the one I crave

--Verse 4
She holds my heart in her hands
In the wink of an eye
All life is hers to own or break
She's the one of fire and flame

--Pre-chorus 2
Her raven locks fall down past shoulders length
And shimmer in the night
When the moon has come
Her curse in tongues becomes nocturnal fire

(repeat chorus, then to bridge)

--Bridge
Her beauty passes all creation
It's wondrous at night
She's Heaven and she lasts forever
Through eternity with her dark eyes

(repeat chorus 1x then outro)

--Outro
She is the breath of love
The one who walks
In beauty in the night
She is the taste of love
The one who walks
In beauty in the night
She is the face of love
The one who walks
In beauty in the night
She is the bliss of love
The one who walks
In beauty in the night