Eternal echoes

I write a song and given it to Suno for make that. What do you think of this song ? https://suno.com/song/9861e400-7a43-4bd1-ba4d-b527c59d3574

Comments

  • I think it's a very good song. Very commercial sounding. I'll say the same as I said about the last Ai song I just heard and reviewed. It sounds very familiar which has to be down to the Ai training. So said, this is a strong arrangement.šŸ˜€

  • Did you write the lyrics for this one? It's nicely structured, good rhymes. If you'd like comments on the lyric I'd suggest posting it here on TSF as it makes it easier to follow along.

    There are a lot of words in there, which can suit a modern style, but it does result in less room for longer notes, and space. It becomes a bit more staccato. But if you like the style Suno applied to it, then it all fits together well.

    I think the chorus comes a little late in the song. I'd be tempted to put the first one in after verse 2 rather than waiting till after v3.

  • yes i wrote the lyrics. i was curious to see what suno could do with them.

  • I’m using AI as well. Suno. Good song and lyrics!
  • (Verse 1)

    Walking down this lonely street, I'm lost in thoughts of you and me,

    Every step a heartbeat loud, whispers of love, a silent crowd.

    The city lights, they shine so bright, but not as much as your eyes' light,

    Memories linger in the night, holding on to dreams so tight.

    We used to dance under the stars, now I'm tracing these faded scars,

    Time has flown, but hearts remain, echoes of joy, echoes of pain.


    (Verse 2)

    We laughed until the break of dawn, those golden days now feel so gone,

    Every moment etched in time, a perfect rhythm, a perfect rhyme.

    Your laughter still rings in my ears, a melody that calms my fears,

    Though you're gone, you're always near, in every smile, in every tear.

    The seasons change, the world moves on, yet my love for you is strong,

    Through the storms and endless dawn, your shadow's where I belong.


    (Verse 3)

    So many nights I lie awake, wishing for another chance to take,

    To hold you close, to feel your touch, I'm missing you, oh, so much.

    Your scent still lingers in the air, a sweet reminder you were there,

    In dreams we dance, in dreams we fly, beneath the ever-changing sky.

    The photos fade, but not the feel, of a love so true, a love so real,

    In every song, in every line, your spirit whispers, "You are mine."


    (Chorus)

    Oh, love, you were my everything,

    The reason my heart learned to sing,

    Though time has taken you away,

    Your love in my heart will stay.


    (Verse 4)

    The days are long, the nights are cold, without your hand for me to hold,

    I see your face in every crowd, calling my name, calling it loud.

    Our favorite spots now feel so bare, without you here, there's no one there,

    Yet in my heart, you still reside, a constant warmth, a constant guide.

    With every sunset, every dawn, your love's the light I journey on,

    Though miles apart, you're in my soul, forever young, forever whole.


    (Verse 5)

    I walk this path with heavy feet, searching for the love so sweet,

    In every breeze, in every sigh, I hear your voice, I feel you nigh.

    The world moves fast, but I stand still, holding on to what I feel,

    For every tear, there's a smile, making this life worth the while.

    Though shadows fall and dark may rise, I see your light in the skies,

    Guiding me through every fear, whispering, "I am here."



    (chorus)


    (end)

    In the silence, I hear your voice,

    Guiding me, helping me rejoice,

    No distance, no time can erase,

    The love we shared, our sweet embrace.


    (just to help others out with feedback @albatroz šŸ‘)


    The lyrics are good and flow well. Suno has done a reasonable job with them. As one expects from AI it is mixed very well.


    All best,


    CCB

  • Thoroughly enjoy the lyrics in this song as they're eternally relatable with anyone who has experienced love and loss. I can't say I like what AI created from your lyrics but I guess it allows for the music to be heard not just read. I believe this done by humans who could put the motion behind the vocals and music would bring this song to label ready level, but that is coming from a poet who truly appreciates your lyrics.

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