Look Up Lyrics
Kayla813
United States
I sit across from this guy
He looks so sad, he looks up to the sky
What is going through his mind?
He looks like he is ready to die
I turn back around
Find my feet on the ground
I don't make a sound
I have become completely numb
My face turns away
Do I look like this man?
I stop and go blank
I turn back around
Find my feet on the ground
I don't make a sound
Why are my "friends" watching me drown?
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Comments
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Gives me a sense of melancholy.
With your title being "Look up" you might consider adding that to the chorus. I can imagine adding another line being "Look up, look up and see me" or something like that.
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I go along with RDM's suggestion. Nicely done
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