forever it is only, one more day away

https://soundcloud.com/sidsshovel/forever-it-is-only-one-more-day-away?si=133fd457e76a42a0b71f2d055c49005e&utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing (right click, select open link in new tab) for song

lyrics SS music/vocals Ai

[intro]

[verse 1]

We all pretended we weren't lookin',

stared out the corners of our eyes.

The pretty lady had hair like fire,

across the room, I heard her cry.

[verse 2]

Orphans, that no one wanted,

we're living victims of the war.

Buried deep beneath the debris,

we weren't special any more.

chorus

I've only another sleep, to go,

nothing will stop, or get in the way.

When tomorrow comes, it'll change my life,

my forever it is only, one more day away.

[verse 3]

Although, they never told us,

we talked when we went to bed.

They called my parents, patriots,

the name they gave the dead.

chorus

I've only another sleep, to go,

nothing will stop, or get in the way.

When tomorrow comes, it'll change my life,

my forever it is only, one more day away.

[verse 4]

I was called to the matron's room,

the pretty lady she was there.

They talked about adoptions,

and tomorrow, I'd go with her.

chorus

I've only another sleep, to go,

nothing will stop, or get in the way.

When tomorrow comes, it'll change my life,

my forever it is only, one more day away.

bridge

I thought I'd cried all the tears in me,

but still there was more to come.

She drew me near and hugged me tight,

whispered, from now on, I'm your mum.

chorus

I've only another sleep, to go,

nothing will stop, or get in the way.

When tomorrow comes, it'll change my life,

my forever it is only, one more day away.

[outro]

my forever it is only, one more day away.

it is only, one more day away.

one more day away.


[Fade to End]


additional music and vocals on Soundcloud, Sid Shovel

Comments

  • Ah that's lovely. For me the meaning of the chorus became clear at verse 4, and that seems perfect.

    My favorite lines are:

    They called my parents, patriots,

    the name they gave the dead.

    Strong write Sid!

  • pete692
    pete692 Las Vegas, NV, USA
    Great material, great performance, strong production. Nice work!
  • ElvisNash
    ElvisNash Calif
    edited June 2024

    AI does a good job : One more Day . is a cleaner title

    some of your grammar is a bit off Sid . That's not really conversational...E.g._(I've been wanting to use that for a month). I've only another sleep, to go.... my forever it is only, one more day away.

    I would go over them IMHO , Well I never say that in real life , But it works wonder on the net for some reason

    Good job man , AI is taking over the world , looks like , Nashville is moving to Bolivia.

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