My First True Love Lyrics
Kayla813
United States
That could have been me,
if you listened a little longer.
I asked so long,
the vision got foggier.
So I took a breath
and let go,
never thought we'd see a day
we wouldn't be the stars in each other's show.
But now I see,
what life has done to me,
the past 15 years,
I know this was how it was always suppst to be,
but I still can't help but stare.
Look at you soar my first love,
look at you grow,
I'm happy you found you're way, why not let it be known?
Although it brings tears to my eyes, it's a bitter sweet cry.
I am still trying to find my way, haven't found anyone to stay,
Or at least a certain way
had a few bumps,
some flimsy lumps,
but I'm trying,
I'm trying
I'm trying
if you listened a little longer.
I asked so long,
the vision got foggier.
So I took a breath
and let go,
never thought we'd see a day
we wouldn't be the stars in each other's show.
But now I see,
what life has done to me,
the past 15 years,
I know this was how it was always suppst to be,
but I still can't help but stare.
Look at you soar my first love,
look at you grow,
I'm happy you found you're way, why not let it be known?
Although it brings tears to my eyes, it's a bitter sweet cry.
I am still trying to find my way, haven't found anyone to stay,
Or at least a certain way
had a few bumps,
some flimsy lumps,
but I'm trying,
I'm trying
I'm trying
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Comments
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Much stronger structure in this one, with those verses up front, and the clear rhyming scheme. It feels much more like a song to me and something you could set music to. Later it branches out, but many songs do that.
And, as always, you can feel every bump and bruise in the lyric.
Nicely done.
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