You belong

You belong

Verse

There’s a side of me you don’t know.

I hide it from the world.

It’s a secret I’ve been keeping

Till I find the right girl.

I know you feel you don’t belong

But I’ll show you that you do.

If you can keep my secret girl

I’ll do the same for you.

Chorus

Come along, come along

Oh won’t you come along.

We’ll go to a place where

You feel like you belong.

Verse

It’s a world without judgement calls.

Where different is ok.

It’s a long, long way from this place

But just a kiss away.

I have always been a dreamer

And you’ve been in my dreams.

We can run away together

Act any way we please.

Chorus

Come along, come along

Oh won’t you come along.

We’ll go to a place where

You feel like you belong.

Verse

If you promise that you’ll love me

I’ll do the same for you.

It won’t matter what people think

Or what they think is true.

I think you’re as close to perfect

As you were in my dreams.

Oh baby won’t you come along

And run away with me.

Bridge

Let them tell their stories

Wonder where we’ve gone.

Chorus

Come along, come along

Oh won’t you come along.

We’ll go to a place where

You feel like you belong.

Comments

  • sidshovel
    sidshovel merseyside

    This song's too good for it's own good. you got me from the beginning, questions coming after each section, building, building. Tension crackling as we bowl along, wondering wondering, yes, no he can't be, maybe!

    I'm on the edge of my seat ready for the big reveal then bang, like the end of one of my Ai songs, cut off in it's prime!

    You could have put me out of my misery and made him a vampire or a purveyor of hallucinogenic class A drugs, anything would do.

    Still loved it, you swine.

    Sid

  • Always open to changes.Might wanna co write one?
  • I think the verses are very strong.

    Not sure the "come alongs" in the chorus are adding greatly. Feels like there is room to do more there.

    But overall it looks like a keeper.

  • RCJames
    RCJames Albuquerque, NM

    A fine piece - you sure know how to make a person feel welcome.

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