For the people Lyrics
Gudda crawl before you walk
Gudda walk before you run
Listen to God
Like he holds a gun
To your head
Is the message that is said
In the Bible
I still believe in the disciples
Though the media got it wrong
Watching tonight tear down someone strong
There is a two tire system of justice
Watching trumps trial tonight
Made me notice this
Still can't pinpoint the charges spued
Watching this corrupt trial is worse than family feud
I write when I have to hold back
It saves me from having a fatal heart attack
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Hi Kayla813,
I believe our songs directly benefit from the amount of passion and emotion we put into them.
I enjoy your songs because it's clear you put your heart and soul into them all.
Keep them coming.
Sid
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This feels like an outpouring of your feelings. I think you have some good material to work with, but it doesn't yet feel like it's been shaped and crafted into a song.
I'd look for a hook, a central idea to build around. What phrase might sum up what you want to say? Can you turn it into a chorus?
How can you set up the context for the song? Could you describe the courthouse scene or something that takes us into the drama. That would be a nice verse 1 to start with.
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Yes u seem determined
I would study his book
You can't just say GOD Bless America , Without building blocks to pay it off .
Yes political songs will be pounded along as the election gets nearer.
The ( secret to life) " is probably moving to a small town on a lake . You'll never write a political song again.
Jesus will have to send you a email " I know you are busy fishing , but I'm thinking about coming back"
With that book, You'll jump ahead of the pack by about 400% or more .
"The Blue Book Of Grammar" is also important by two-fold.1/ lyrics that make sense. 2/ communication skills.
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