stuck on you like glue

@carroll . . . this has all the makings of a great up tempo rock song, though, I'm not sold on that BRIDGE section.

Here I am looking at rings.

Here I am on my knees.

Here I am at your mercy.

Wanting you to love me.

. . . was thinking maybe the beat of the snare goes to half time, then something like this ?

Now I'm at the store, looking at rings

I never know what the next day brings

Mercy me . . . I'm at your mercy

I just want you to love me

. . . I'm hearing it as a story about a rock'n'roller who finally finds love, and is confused about what to do . . . so, the makings of a good rock song . . . my tendency would be to soften some lines like "I’d seduce them and I’d leave them" and "I’d use them and I’d leave." . . . it's a tough one, because personally I would find it harder to sing those lines . . . but after all, if you keep with the character you've portrayed, it is kind of about a reformed rock'n'roller . . . just ideas and food for thought . . . I definitely hear a great up tempo rock song in my head, when reading your lyric on this one . . .

Bruce