Who have I let it into my house ?

This is just a bit of fun, if an anyone wants to play around with it. It was done as a rap.

Who have I let into my house ?


When you knocked, at my door 

I thought - who are you ?


I hadn't thought it through

when I asked you in 


you questioned if I wanted 

to be forgiven, for my sin


Oh God , Oh God 

Who have I let into my house ?


Oh God , Oh God 

Who have I let into my house ?


You were halfway through

going through my biscuit tin


your extra big hands 

round the coffee, I'd made 


You smiled

when you said that God forgave


I started thinking of

how I could get you to leave 


Oh God , Oh God 

Who have I let into my house ?


Oh God , Oh God 

Who have I let into my house


you started talking about 

what it was like in hell


You wanted another,cup of coffee

and biscuits as well


Oh God , Oh God 

Who have I let into my house ?


Oh God , Oh God 

Who have I let into my house


the telephone rang

oh what a relief


I told my house guest 

that it was the police


and that they were on the lookout

for a thief


Oh God , Oh God 

Who have I let into my house ?


Oh God , Oh God 

Who have I let into my house


I could see a change come into your eyes 

it was a mixture of fear, and surprise 


Oh God , Oh God 

Who have I let into my house ?


Oh God , Oh God 

Who have I let into my house


you made your excuses 

and went out the door 

I was very relieved 

I couldn't take no more 


I heard on the radio

that you'd been caught

I was asked to go 

and stand up in court 


Oh God , Oh God 

Who have I let into my house ?


Oh God , Oh God 

Who have I let into my house


Oh God , Oh God 

Who have I let into my house ?


Oh God , Oh God 

Who have I let into my house


Oh God , Oh God 

Who have I let into my house ?


Oh God , Oh God 

Who have I let into my house

Comments

  • Definitely see it working in rap.

    I like the change in perspective across the song. At the start it's like a visit from the mormons or similar and then turns into a thief.

    Unusual too! Don't think I've seen similar before.

    Good stuff.

  • KatiesPRIDE
    KatiesPRIDE Hertfordshire

    Thanks Owen, I don't know where it came from lol

  • robcrozier
    robcrozier Ann Arbor,MI

    I like suspense in this. I chuckled at

    You were halfway through

    going through my biscuit tin

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