Who have I let it into my house ?

This is just a bit of fun, if an anyone wants to play around with it. It was done as a rap.
Who have I let into my house ?
When you knocked, at my door
I thought - who are you ?
I hadn't thought it through
when I asked you in
you questioned if I wanted
to be forgiven, for my sin
Oh God , Oh God
Who have I let into my house ?
Oh God , Oh God
Who have I let into my house ?
You were halfway through
going through my biscuit tin
your extra big hands
round the coffee, I'd made
You smiled
when you said that God forgave
I started thinking of
how I could get you to leave
Oh God , Oh God
Who have I let into my house ?
Oh God , Oh God
Who have I let into my house
you started talking about
what it was like in hell
You wanted another,cup of coffee
and biscuits as well
Oh God , Oh God
Who have I let into my house ?
Oh God , Oh God
Who have I let into my house
the telephone rang
oh what a relief
I told my house guest
that it was the police
and that they were on the lookout
for a thief
Oh God , Oh God
Who have I let into my house ?
Oh God , Oh God
Who have I let into my house
I could see a change come into your eyes
it was a mixture of fear, and surprise
Oh God , Oh God
Who have I let into my house ?
Oh God , Oh God
Who have I let into my house
you made your excuses
and went out the door
I was very relieved
I couldn't take no more
I heard on the radio
that you'd been caught
I was asked to go
and stand up in court
Oh God , Oh God
Who have I let into my house ?
Oh God , Oh God
Who have I let into my house
Oh God , Oh God
Who have I let into my house ?
Oh God , Oh God
Who have I let into my house
Oh God , Oh God
Who have I let into my house ?
Oh God , Oh God
Who have I let into my house
Comments
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Definitely see it working in rap.
I like the change in perspective across the song. At the start it's like a visit from the mormons or similar and then turns into a thief.
Unusual too! Don't think I've seen similar before.
Good stuff.
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Thanks Owen, I don't know where it came from lol
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I like suspense in this. I chuckled at
You were halfway through
going through my biscuit tin
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