Ruth
Words me. Music - Suno
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[Verse 1]
On the pulpit preachin' fire and brimstone
These voices of mine, never leave me alone
Tellin me, which are saints or sinners
True believers from the unbelievers
[Verse 2]
There is a saying, thy God is my God
Do you believe, you know, in God?
I used to pray, every day, I prayed
For these impure thoughts to go away
[Verse 3]
When I wear this wig, I identify as Ruth
Now, don't lie I want to hear the truth
Don't you find me so very pretty?
Well, I'm as pretty, as any man can be
[Bridge]
But pretty was not the word you said
Is it, no, my kind is better off dead
You didn't think I heard what I heard
When you called me that horrible word
[Outro]
Here, let me set you with the flock
I've got quite the congregation
Now, we should all rise to say the prayer
Oh, silly me, the dead can't rise, can they
Comments
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That went a little different direction than I was thinking at the start.
Nice job Bill.
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Thanks Tex,
Out of curiosity, which direction?
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Never expected a cross dresser or what ever else he might be.
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Thanks tex. I originally had verse 3 as verse 1 but decided to swap.
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God and cross dressers ? Well no idea , My life is to complicated to judge them . What ever works is my motto
Sounds good Bill
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Thanks Elvis.
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These Christians passed out in a strip club in Dallas , but fail to mention that on the whole judgment thing . they get amnesia and memory loss . is Walmart open I need to look good Sunday
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Interesting choice of musical style. I can imagine this working as more hard rock too.
What I'm getting from this is intolerance against a trans woman, particularly in the context of the church. A religious person, perhaps someone who considers themselves kind based on the name, seeking solace there, but receiving hostility instead, and wrestling with their own identity and beliefs at the same time.
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Thanks for the reply,
Could work as hard rock, I was picturing a one-act play in the same vein as tim burton / danny elfman
He's simply a cross-dressing ex-priest killing those that made fun of him and called him names. cross-dressers are males that like wearing women's clothing, they still identify themselves as male.
need to work on my writing skills a bit more 😂
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Well, see what other comments you get! Could be just me. Do you post these on other sites too? Good to get a range of opinions.
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With all my songs, I leave it up for you to decide, there is really no right or wrong answer. I have an idea in my head, but it's not written in stone. It's no different than a painting. I painted an ugly ferris wheel, that my sister found beauty in, was she wrong? no, that's what she saw.
No, this is the only songwriting forum i'm on.
I do post my songs on Audius, where I can tell by the reposts how well it's percieved.
Thanks for responding :)
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To be totally honest I think old white men should get a parade like the gays do . Everybody gets a holiday but us . But don't close the banks I need the cash . Happy Old white man day , thanks proud to be an American . 10% coupon off from Walmart to buy a gun rack . don't put a poster for whites only , that could be a problem . You'd get hate mail from Dave Chapelle . Chris Rock might pay you a visit . You old cracker. Come to think about it , lets call it old cracker day
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that works :)
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ha ha ha
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