Feedback Please.
Hey guys, I was just wondering if I could get some feedback on a song please?
I’m apart of an alt-rock band and have just written this new demo track, with me playing the guitars, programming the drums and singing backing vocals with our singer singing over the top (at times they can be a bit out of tune, which is something we’re working on). This is really just a simple ABAB song but after listening over a few times now, feel as if it’s a bit too copy and paste-esque, what do you guys think, does this work or would a new section enhance it? Any feedback would be great!
Thanks in advance,
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You could use a bridge or something else to break it up. Maybe just have the guitars drop out for a few measures. Has a post-punk vibe to it. Good start!
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What you have so far is good.
I agree with jrandolph about a bridge. Maybe something softer with clean guitars, for dynamics.
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Yep, similar comments from me. I like what you have so far, but it could benefit from some kind of break or change up in there.
I would also say that the mix feels very treble heavy to me, but that should be any easy fix.
But you've definitely got something to work with.
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Hola @Thomas
Nice to meet you!!
I write to you while I listen to you and moving my head to the rhythm of the song!!! I like the colour, a fresh sound. Maybe it could use some support for the change parts to make them stand out more...
Regarding the mix, you could lower the volume of the voice a bit and thus it would integrate with the backing and the backing would have more presence.
Ciao!!
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Sorry. I don't like the vocal.
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It has a great garage band feel to it. I don't think there's anything wrong with vocals, but they sound a bit detached. Possibly too high in the mix. I can imagine this working well live. Good song😀
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