Raining Whiskey Bottles , Been broke with bs , So when I get out of hole , Do this ,
See if ya'll can punch holes in lyrics
Them neon lights looks her big green eyes
the devil's winking gone is my sunshine smile
It’s clouding up with theses double shots
As I look back losing everything I got
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The weatherman says it’s a beautiful day
But where I’m standing it’s all turned gray
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it’s raining Whiskey bottles
Since we’ve been thru
A 100 proof of regrets
and the cold hard truth
This storm never ends
It’s pouring again
I got a hard hat and Bourbon Googles
Cuz its raining Whiskey bottles
V2
California summers are a long ways a way
I heard she hooked up with what’s his name
It’s feeling like 40 days and 40 nights
Sitting on this bar stool losing my mind
Pre
I need a steel umbrella in this 2am parking lot
It’s filling up my truck boots and damn socks
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I like the story line here .elvis
Like this lina alot...I got a hard hat and Bourbon Googles.great work0 -
Made my lose my job1
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Along with her Carloina sunshine smile
Man its coming down like cats and dogs
Yeah But now you know cowboys did drugs in 1880 or so Remfire , its probably why they landed on boot hill
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Them neon lights looks like her big green eyes
Along with her Carloina sunshine smile
But its clouding up with theses double shots
She ghosted me losing everything I got
Pre
The weatherman says it’s a beautiful day
But where I’m standing it’s all turned black and gray
Ch
it’s raining Whiskey bottles
Since we’ve been thru
A 100 proof of regrets
and the cold hard truth
This storm never ends
A steady downfall again
With a cowboy hard hat and Bourbon Googles
Cuz its raining Whiskey bottles
V2
California summers are a long ways a way
I heard she hooked up with what’s his name
It’s feeling like 40 days and 40 nights
Sitting on this bar stool losing my mind
Pre
I need a steel umbrella in this 2am parking lot
Lost the keys to my truck its pouring cats and dogs
Ch
Musical Bridge solo
ch
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Them neon lights Look like her big green eyes
Along with her CAROLINA sunshine smile
But its clouding up with THESE double shots
She ghosted me losing everything I got
Pre
The weatherman says it’s a beautiful day
But my heart is black and gray
Ch
it’s raining Whiskey bottles
Since we’ve been thru
ONE HUNDRED proof of regrets
and the cold hard truth
This storm never ends
I need a pretend girlfriend
Where's my hard hat and Bourbon Googles
Cuz its raining Whiskey bottles
V2
California summers are a long ways AWAY
I heard she hooked up with what’s his name
It’s feeling like 40 days and 40 nights
Sitting on this Barstool losing my mind
Pre
I need a steel umbrella in this 2am parking lot
This truck needs to turn into a yacht
Ch
Ch
Bridge
If I keep knocking back this Jack Daniels
I won't notice my life in shambles
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This is really taking shape with the changes so far. The hook is great and has a nice country feel throughout. I love the first line. It sets up the theme with a fantastic visual.
I like the ghosted line. Feels modern. I would suggest 'She ghosted me TAKING everything I got'.
I love this line in the chorus:
"ONE HUNDRED proof of regrets"
But I don't care for either rhyme to go with 'ends'
'This storm never ends
'A steady downfall again' / 'I need a pretend girlfriend'
How about something like, reliving her goodbye again
I also prefer "With a cowboy hard hat and Bourbon Googles" rather than 'Where's my...' ]. I know where they both are. Do cowboys where hard hats? I would be fine with simply 'cowboy hat' for the rain. It's a great line!
I was expecting a rhyme for these two lines:
"It’s feeling like 40 days and 40 nights
Sitting on this Barstool losing my mind"
How about 'losing this fight'?
Hope this helps a little. I hope to hear it when you are happy with it :)
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Them neon lights Look like her big green eyes
Along with her CAROLINA sunshine smile
But its clouding up with THESE double shots
She ghosted me losing everything I got
Pre
The weatherman says it’s a beautiful day
But my heart is black and gray
Ch
it’s raining Whiskey bottles
Since we’ve been thru
filled with the cold hard truth
This storm never ends
With a broken girlfriend
Its pouring over and over again
Where's my hard hat and Bourbon Googles
Cuz its raining God damn Whiskey bottles
V2
California summers are a long ways AWAY
I heard she hooked up with what’s his name
A down fall of 40 days and 40 nights
Sitting on this Barstool losing my mind
Pre
I need a steel umbrella in this 2am parking lot
This truck needs to turn into a tank or yacht
Ch
Bridge
If one hits me over the head
I'll get memory loss
and forget what she said
Jack Daneils aint dead
Drink it up
Ch
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i got sidetracked on a new one , Go back to this later
Thanks
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