Her Gettysburg Address
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one song where I actually let Ai decide what direction to go, but wasn't on purpose.
I had a second verse, which tells story of him following her to hospital,, end up married and living in Gettysburg.
But Ai wouldntv replicate the melody in first verse, no matter how many tries, so I said you know what, let me skip second verse, kinda contrived anyway, go right to bridge, and I liked how it leaves it open to listener to say, hmm wonder what happened.
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Her Gettysburgh Address
Haulin ass from Pittsburgh
stormy night scene
hydroplaning cargo
out on highway 15
Gimme Three Steps
playin on the radio
never saw her comin
but I saw them tires bloo
And I had dreams of bein hero
to that damsel in distress
wondered if I'd see her again
at her Gettysburg address
ya see, I grew up in Gettysburg
it was quite the coincidence
population of 7,000
The Gods were makin sense
yeah, I had dreams of bein hero
to that damsel in distress
wondered if I'd see her again
at her Gettysburg address
I had a second verse, which tells story of him following her to hospital,, end up married and living in Gettysburg.
But Ai wouldntv replicate the melody in first verse, no matter how many tries, so I said you know what, let me skip second verse, kinda contrived anyway, go right to bridge, and I liked how it leaves it open to listener to say, hmm wonder what happened.
https://soundclick.com/share.cfm?id=15090686
Her Gettysburgh Address
Haulin ass from Pittsburgh
stormy night scene
hydroplaning cargo
out on highway 15
Gimme Three Steps
playin on the radio
never saw her comin
but I saw them tires bloo
And I had dreams of bein hero
to that damsel in distress
wondered if I'd see her again
at her Gettysburg address
ya see, I grew up in Gettysburg
it was quite the coincidence
population of 7,000
The Gods were makin sense
yeah, I had dreams of bein hero
to that damsel in distress
wondered if I'd see her again
at her Gettysburg address
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Interesting feel to it, very laid back.
I like the play on words with Gettysburg Address.
Story feels half told to me, I would have liked to hear the second half - understand why you can't do that though!
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Thanks, when I finished the ai, I noticed that I liked it unfinished.
Might revisit it0 -
I lie the story, yes, and think same as @RainyDayMan why?
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Thanks @ Mora
I mistyped the first chorus,
And I had dreams of bein hero
to that damsel in distress
voice on the short wave says she had a Gettysburg address
The title was just Us of our American president Lincoln speech
But I wondered how many knew it's an actual city near Pittsburgh, pa.
You never hear of that city only the speech 175 years ago or so.
So I thought I'd write about the place. Guy sees woman crash, learns she's from Gettysburg, and he is too...
I wrote following verses but they were kinda predictable, thought I'd let the listener decide what happened0
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