It's Hot
A different style than I usually have, I hope it surprises you.
The heat entered the room
without hesitation
leaving me awake
watching your nape
your neck
your shoulder
your body
I spy on your breathing
now slow
and I wonder
what your dreams are
when your hand
caresses the pillow.
The smell of my sweat
takes me to a past reality
when you and I drank from love and sin
shrouded in the same darkness
that today suffocates
and frightens me.
I get up to look at the night
while an elusive moon
hides
putting and removing shadows
on the rooftops and in the corners.
It smells of wet earth
but the air doesn't move
even the hours do not walk
since the day everything changed
how hot it is
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@MoraAmaroLaLoba - I remember this from another site. brilliantly written piece on self-reflection. It seems presenting your work in an art gallery is out of the question, how about compiling your works into a book of poetry and self-publish. More people need to experience this. :)
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Great video, as always, and I love Marcus' music here.
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Nice song Mora, your voice and style always reminds me of Eartha Kitt, before your time, but close in character and output.
Lovely well done.
Sid
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The first thing that struck me was aligning the swing of the pendulum with the beat of the music. A small thing but it really kicks!
"when you and I drank from love and sin"
what a lovely line!
But then followed by these
shrouded in the same darkness
that today suffocates
and frightens me.
which seem tragic.
It smells of wet earth
And that one just feels very grounding, bringing us back down after floating with the moon.
I enjoyed it!
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It is surprising! Good one Mora. Very groovy.
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Gracias, you make me feel good and interesting hahaha Muchas gracias, have a nice day!!! @bhengen
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Great track it keeps evolving. Interesting lyrics.
Great video! I'd still like to hear what could be possible with melody and singing.
But you do well in your zone
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Hola @OnlyGavin
Gracias, much appreciated. Music here is only mine, Marcus did not play anything this time.
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Thank you, muchas gracias @sidshovel
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Hola @RainyDayMan
All songs hace pieces of reality, memories, moments, all is true and all is dream, everything can happen writing.
Thank you so much @RainyDayMan
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Hi M... a VERY provocative piece. I, as well as probably everyone, have "drank from the cup of love and sin."
And only now, do I have I contemplate remorse.
GREAT line!
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Hola @IronKnee
Gracias. Aquí estamos otra vez, commenting on our work.
Regrets... it's like wanting to drink the water that has already passed, something useless, although perhaps it serves as redemption, I don't know.
I look at my life and evidently I'm not proud of many thing that I continue doing hahahas... but when it comes to love, and I'm talking about love, everything was and is surrender, and that's something we shouldn't regret.
Surrender is rebirth, for better or worse, we are reborn but the important thing is what kind of fire we burn in, it all depends on that, alchemy. Love not only loves, it transforms like the flame. This is an old thought of mine.
Lately, I've seen you feeling regretful, tired of many things, at least that's how I feel ypu. Don't pay attention to yourself; in reality, they're all thoughts that at certain moments become recurrent and they haunt us because deep down we want to suffer them, to punish us... and at this stage of life, we have to be flowers of oneself, not coal, it is the best gift one can give oneself.
I'm probably saying silly things, but that's not my intention. I appreciate you.
Mora
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Hola @DullRoar Chico, qué ló! What a mess! I thought I answered you but no... Thank yo, so glad you like it!! When I do songs in Spanish I am never sure about if English listeners will like it or not... But her it is, a new color.
Stay well
Mora
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Glad it was an entertaining listen!!! Thank you! @Domd
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