Slamming doors
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ErkjzUbCRS4
Alone
he is always alone
renting rooms good or bad,
or average
he only seeks peace
but
children playing with the ball
in the hallway
mothers shouting at their husbands
neighbors
slamming or banging doors
they are all noise
And once again looking at ads
trying to find at least that calm
he needs
to dream into his dreams
He is only a suitcase
full of winkled clothes
he is a nobody
in a world of disguises
And once again looking at ads
trying to find at least that calm
he needs
to dream into his dreams
maybe tomorrow
maybe maybe
Comments
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@MoraAmaroLaLoba - sometimes circumstances put us in spots we necessarily don't want to be, but here we are :) Again, you have the capability of breaking down complex ideas and make them relatable.
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This song seems more lyrically dominant than some of your others, and for that reason you might consider bringing the vocals forward in the mix and allowing them to take center stage.
It's also a bit less poetic and more down to earth in the language used. But still some lovely lines there like:
He is only a suitcase
full of wrinkled clothes
he is a nobody
in a world of disguises
It feels like a snapshot of someone's life more than a message, which is fine. He seems undefined "a nobody" as the song says, separated from those around him, not interacting with them, and only hearing them through walls. An indrawn breath, a gathering in of energy before taking on the world again tomorrow.
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@MoraAmaroLaLoba - Your music is unlike anything that I have heard before. I think I have mentioned that earlier as well.
I know of an artist on Instagram who is kind of in the same vein stylistically like you, in the realm of experimental avant-garde modern pop but has a bit of a different sound and a different vocal delivery as well.
Very cool :) I wonder how do you put the entire song structure together since its so out of whack!! (in a good way) :)
Keep them coming
Do you have an album with these songs released?
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This a thoroughly city perspective from the visuals to the sound - very evocative for me after 10 years living in Manhattan.
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