They are lovers

Sure


https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_LaKQrmVioY


Everything is possible in my mind

good and bad coexist in secret

they are lovers


I look in the closet for the color that dresses my day

wondering

what is the point

if I am a flower of what has no use



I get dresed

I comb my hair

I put on perfume

I am ready to rescue me 

from my shadows


I don't want to be my excuse

I don't want to be my fears

I don't want to be a chain of events 

weighing down my stpes


And I go out dressed in air

to be a landscape that moves

within another landscape

like a butter fly of one day

Comments

  • sidshovel
    sidshovel merseyside

    I liked the song very much Mora, one point from my unmusical ears, it seems the vocals are too low and are partially buried in the music. No doubt Chris Price will comment quite soon, wait for his feedback before replying to mine, I could be completely wrong!

    Thanks for posting, good listen as always.

    Sid

  • @MoraAmaroLaLoba - well, that was one acid trip, or I imagine one on acid.. never tried myself, don't really need it.

    the visual are stunning..

    I have to agree with Sid, the vocals are a bit soft and need to be boosted a tad.

    This line - weighing down my stpes- do you mean steps? not sure.

  • Another great video, Mora. I agree with Sid, that the vocal could be turned up a bit, especially in the second half of the song.

    I particularly like this lyric. Very poetic without being obscure.

  • MoraAmaroLaLoba
    MoraAmaroLaLoba Madrid (Spain)

    Yes, vocals are a bit low here, I had problems mixing with my new headphones, do not find the good level...

  • MoraAmaroLaLoba
    MoraAmaroLaLoba Madrid (Spain)

    Si, voice is low, and yes, the word is "steps" of course hahaha

  • MoraAmaroLaLoba
    MoraAmaroLaLoba Madrid (Spain)

    Gracias @OnlyGavin

    I like a lot the lyrics here, yes, they are truly poetic and full of imagery, I think, I love the lines

    "dressed in air to be a landscape that moves within another landscape like a butterfly..."


    I appreciate a lot you like tis poetry. Stay well.



    Maybe your sister in Valladolid is not suffering heat like here...?

  • Love the atmosphere! Right from the opening that got me in.

    good and bad coexist in secret

    they are lovers

    Lovely lines! And quite profound.

    I look in the closet for the color that dresses my day

    Another lovely line! I like the idea of selecting something to color my day, like choosing a mood.

    "of what has no use" it might be smoother to say "that has no use" but not a big deal.

    I like the contrast in the lyric between everyday events: getting up and dressed, combing your hair etc, with the much more abstract ideas of good & bad, fears & excuses. It suggests you are simultaneously in two worlds, the mundane and the esoteric, an inner and an outer world.

    "I don't want to be my excuse

    I don't want to be my fears

    I don't want to be a chain of events 

    weighing down my steps"

    I like the whole meaning of that stanza. The recognition of how much our mental landscape shapes our lives, and how we can sabotage our own actions. Here you deliberately surface that causal chain and choose to break it.

    And I go out dressed in air

    I don't understand that line, but I love the imagery of it.

    I really enjoyed this one Mora, both the music and the lyrics. Well done indeed!

  • MoraAmaroLaLoba
    MoraAmaroLaLoba Madrid (Spain)

    What a detailed, extensive and beautiful comment! I thank you so much for your time. I know you're a very dedicated man who, in addition to running the forum, creates your own artistic expression, always so poetic, and comment on everyone else's work...!!!

    I agree with your general analysis; bravo for your wise and empathetic insight.


    PS.: When I say "dressed in air" I mean "naked".🤗

  • Ah! Thank you! The best dress was none at all.

  • OnlyGavin
    edited July 14

    Hi Mora. It's my daughter, and she has moved back to northern France just in time to escape the worst of the heat. I see that the forecast for Valladolid this week goes all the way to 98 degrees F (36 degrees C) before it cools down a bit. Crazy! I hope you are staying cool. Maybe time to dress in air 😄

  • MoraAmaroLaLoba
    MoraAmaroLaLoba Madrid (Spain)

    Ah! Oh! Sorry.

    Heat is learning to cook people in many ways, it has a special ability, it doesn't need to use spices, it's that natural.

  • Domd
    Domd New Jersey
    edited July 15
    @MoraAmaroLaLoba another entertaining piece. all the textures and how it builds.
    Iove this line...

    good and bad coexist in secret
    they are lovers.

    Should bring the vocal up more , but another doozy
  • RCJames
    RCJames Albuquerque, NM

    Bravo Bravissimo - the quality of your work maintains itself at a very high level - always a pleasure.

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