The Human Spark

Domd · June 24

My lyrics triggering an AI Arrangement

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She came from New York
On a train
Threw away her dope
Suddenly there's hope
She thumbed a ride on 21
I thought alright
Ain't got nothin but time Tonight

We traded stories for a while
But this one had me beat
She grew up on the streets
I said "let's stop and get a drink"
Shook her head
I appreciate that man,
But no way
I sure appreciate that
Man, no way

I'm lookin for an Antibody, Antibody
To help me fight a soul disease
I'm lookin for ya Anybody, Anybody
Don't wanna lose control of me
And I'm so sick waitin on the fading dark
Tonight I'm seekin someone who'll provide
The Human Spark

"There ain't no poison worth it's weight"
She whispered in my ear
"hope you're stayin clear"
It took me 15 years to learn
Learned it all today
So, mister whaddiya say?
So, mister whaddiya say?

I'm lookin for an Antibody, Antibody
To help me fight a soul disease
I'm lookin for ya Anybody, Anybody
Don't wanna lose control of me
And I'm so sick waitin on the fading dark
Tonight I'm seekin someone who'll provide
The Human Spark

I'm lookin for an Antibody, Antibody
To help me fight a soul disease
I'm lookin for ya Anybody, Anybody
Don't wanna lose control of me
And I'm so sick waitin on the fading dark
Tonight I'm seekin someone who'll provide
The Human Spark

bhengen · June 24

@Domd - cool song, sounds like lou reed :)

sidshovel · June 24

This is one of those where the lyrics all come together in the song. Strongly recommend you read the lyrics and then play the song to appreciate them fully.

I have to say I loved it, a very well crafted piece which I enjoyed a lot.

Well done, one to be proud of.

Sid

Domd · June 24

Bhengen, YES! I can totally see lou Reed in this, only hed do it better, and cooler. I'll take that

Sid shovel, wow great review. Appreciate that very much, thanks

MoraAmaroLaLoba · June 24

The song as well as lyrics enters so easy into the ears!!!Very good one!!! Nice vocals

Domd · June 24

@MoraAmaroLaLoba thanks for the listen and nice comments

RainyDayMan · 2:33AM

Definitely has a gritty, cool factor going. It put me in mind of Counting Crows.

Like how you're using Antibody & Anybody. It's really catchy.

Feels like Suno struggled a little on the timing in the chorus, not quite as smooth there. But it's a good vibe and match to the lyric.

Strong lyric!

Domd · 12:20PM

@RainyDayMan

Thanks, I think it's a smidge robotic, I usually try to fix that when I'm listening to what it has to offer. I'm not crazy about the chord progression either, it gets the job done but needs to be tightened up a bit.

Im actually using udio not suno. When I move to suno and I'm able to cover my own takes, and add my riffs and ideas, and sing it, hoping that will bring things up a notch. but these melodies, I spend alot of time sifting through the pile trying to hear close to how it's written. I find overall, results are better if the lyric was already formed in a song

Thanks for listening and your ears

The Human Spark

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