Mindless (Remix)
Words Me; Music Suno
Ok, completely re-wrote this, since the first version spectacularly tanked.
https://suno.com/s/qnRb7eYfBTQRtuK6
[Verse 1]
Ignorance, clouds your judgement
Arrogance, fertilizes your immaturity
You're a vanity boy, so very egotistical
Embrace your kindless, mindless, soul
[Verse 2]
Your fragile little ego, demanding attention
Every spoken word, spun thinly threads in gold
Grandstanding grandeur, trite and hypocritical
Embrace your kindless, mindless, soul
[Verse 3]
Only in humility, can you break free from
Your schoolboy mentality, but you can't
Eternally narcissistic, vile and cynical
Embrace your kindless, mindless, soul
Comments
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@bhengen Yes! I 'get it' better now! Yeah, sometimes they tank, boy, don't we all know! Music and vocals perfect match for your lyric. What a timely song! Also, like the length of this song. In and out and done. Perfect balance.
Renee 😍
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@HummerWisdom - thanks renee.. this seems to be doing better than the first :)
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This one is certainly a lot more accessible. And enjoyable!
By "kindless" do you mean not tied to a specific form?
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haha.. I did not see that correlation. I meant unkind, kindless had the same cadence as mindless.. :). to me the lyrics are still too combative. but then you have queen's death on two legs. this does better on suno and audius that the first version
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I left you a comment on SUNO. . . the gist of it is that this turned out GREAT. I'm amazed.
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Thanks.. I really appreciate it :)
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