The day I had to walk away
Words me, music Suno
https://suno.com/s/ST9cxOwsjC0s3JuZ
[Verse 1]
I watch solemnly as the
Chariot is lost to the sun
What am I to do
Moments seems endless
We know that's not true
The eternal cycle of life
Where old births new
[Verse 2]
Time once a close friend
Transfigures and betrays
Devours minutes and hours
Always somewhere to go
A million miles away
Especially on that day
[Refrain]
Visions of you in the stars
Each a shining memory
Forever sealed in my mind
[Outro]
If I could reach to the skies
And pull you from the heavens
On the backs of white doves
To the cosmos we'd fly
But that's only in dreams
A million miles, it seems
That day, I had to walk away
Comments
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That is just nice, it really is.
So many beautiful lines, it would be an injustice to pick any out above the rest.
It's touching yet at the same time inspiring.
While I find your more abstract work interesting and challenging, this is where you excel.
The poetry and visuals are outstanding.
One to be proud of Bill.
Sid
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@sidshovel - thanks for the comment.. not going to lie, it took a bit out of me to write.. and Suno nailed it. this latest version is amazing. the prompt is ChatGPT, rather burning credits, so far it's been working out well :)
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I can imagine Bill, the emotions just pour out, it must have been draining
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That's a lovely song. Very poignant. That word feels overused, but it seems the right one here.
Sadness and loss. We can all relate in some way. There's an ache in the lyric, and the music matches it.
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@RainyDayMan - thanks the comment, I really appreciate it. i'm glad it resonates :)
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Wow! I'm speechless. Wow. beautiful, heartfelt, and emotional. This song is sad and relatable to majority of us.
Well written. *Your prompting is amazing and how you get the most from Suno.
Great job! Bravo!
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Nice lyrics, Bill. Love the outro. That piano!!
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@bhengen Love your title with inner rhyme, Bill. Very pretty song. Love the way the song comes more alive on "visions of you...." Also, like the way you held out for the title til the end; refreshing!
Renee
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Thanks for the comment, I really appreciate it
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Thanks for the comment. The latest version of Suno is really amazing with how well the make the music.
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Hi B... Your writing is technically as good as anyone's! I just don't get what possessed you to write this down as a song lyric. Reading the lyric leaves me in a dust cloud. The craft is there for all to see, I just don't really get it. Is this a song or some kind of masterpiece, written for poets and scholars?
SUNO can produce anything... it doesn't matter the content. The music, here, overshadows the lyric you wrote.
Perhaps if you write the melody yourself and have SUNO "cover" it, I'm willing to bet you'd really have something.
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What is chat GPT? How do you use it with suno? Stellar song!0
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Thanks for the comment :) Lets. do this, put yourself in a situation where you are watching your wife being carted away for the last time in a black box on a gurney. I was with her until the very end. I watched as they cleaned and prepped her body because I told her I would be with until the very end. If you didn't figure it out, the chariot is her black box. the sun is the bright lights of the hospital hallway. That is what possessed me to write this down, to honor of her memory in my own way.
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Thanks for the comment, chatGPT.com - what you do is you can post your lyrics and ask chatGPT to give you a prompt to put into suno style description. You can tell it to based on the lyrics, give me a prompt for a 60's beach vibe. and it will come back with the words to put into suno.
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Very sad song , touches all the bases in a poetic way , The robots did a good job
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Thanks elvis.
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The poetry escaped me.
Sorry for your loss.
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Thanks..
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