Charlotte's Web
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lyrics SS : music/vocals Ai
[verse 1]
We used to be, the best of friends,
till she came, an' got inbetween.
Turned ya mind, inside out,
sickest bitch, I'd ever seen.
[verse 2]
Knew from the start, she's evil,
whisper here, confidence there,
Her coven, the water cooler,
any secrets, don't tell her.
[chorus]
Words, a curse she put on me,
things she knew, weren't true.
She played, inside my head,
don't let her, get close to you.
[verse 3]
Played one against the other,
sat back, an' watched the fight.
Till H.R., came in the frame,
she's gone, an' out of sight.
[chorus]
Words, a curse she put on me,
things she knew, weren't true.
She played, inside my head,
don't let her, get close to you.
[verse 4]
Pity those, caught in her web,
men an' girls, used her charms.
Not everyone fell, for her looks,
less gullible, she twisted arms.
[bridge]
Came to a head, she posted a pic,
said a Manager, sent it to her.
In defence, H.R. said no way,
they knew, that he was gay.
[final chorus]
Words, a curse she put on me,
things she knew, weren't true.
She played, inside my head,
don't let her, get close to you.
[outro]
To his credit, he called the police,
charged the witch, with blackmail.
A different cooler, for her coven,
Charlotte, got three years in jail.
Comments
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@sidshovel - cool song. I'm guessing this is based on a true story, too lazy to google it :). the music fits perfectly.
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Not a word of it Bill, came right out of my head, that's the scary part!
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That's very talented to be able to craft a story like that. brilliant :)
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Certainly the slippery slope of evil women strikes a chord
Good job Sid
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@ElvisNash, @bhengen, That's what happens when you're forced to watch too many chick soaps with your better half!
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Charlotte's web is a lovely title, and of course benefits from (and contrasts with!) the children's book. I'd like to see a bit more of that in the chorus. You might pinch one of the lines from elsewhere and insert it:
Words, a curse she put on me,
things she knew, weren't true.
Pity those, caught in her web,
don't let her, get close to you.
Strong story line.
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@RainyDayMan Thank you for your feedback and suggestion. The lyrics were developed around the phrase, " Oh, what a tangled web we weave" rather than the childrens story. But hey, why pass up a great hook! Deceit is the primary focus and not entrapment, hence, the line "She played, inside my head." Good line nevertheless.
Appreciate the suggestions as always, keep them coming.
Sid
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Why did I burst out laughing at this? I wasn't expecting it. LMBO!!!
"We used to be, the best of friends,
till she came, an' got inbetween.
Turned ya mind, inside out,
sickest bitch, I'd ever seen."
I can't stop laughing! OMG! What a song. LMBO.
I love it!
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