Good Morning Train Wreck
https://hearthis.at/elvis-nash-xk/man-you-look-like-you-been-to-hell-lead-vox/
Man your looking like you've been to hell and back
Like a locomotive hit you and dragged you down a track
You can't remember what she said or what you did last night
I guess all the shots you had might've started some kind of fight
Ch
Good Morning train wreck
There ain't nothing clearer
Than the first look in the mirror
And you know the guy your seeing is a mess
Mess
It might be time for a reality check
Good morning train wreck
Wreck 4 times
V2
Go get yourself some coffee and try to clear your head
You better call her and apologize at least for what you did
Don't wait to hear about it from one her friends
Or tomorrow you'll end up talking to yourself again
Ch
Bridge
You'd think by now you'd stay out of trouble
Instead of waking up and seeing double
Double trouble
Ch
Comments
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that sounds like my life currently :)
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ha ha ha , its not as bad as this guy . I'll get some harmony and it will be done , I'm thinking snapping fingers on verses
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I don't know if this was intentional because of what the song is about a "train wreck" but it began too rough for me.
I wanted a little easing into the song. Maybe play the guitar a little more in the beginning and then start verse 1.
I started it over to make sure I didn't miss the beginning, when it was in fact the start of the song. Otherwise, great guitar playing, lyrics, and I love listening to your songs. I believe you are a great musician.
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I usually do a 15 second intro on guitar , Not on this one
Thanks
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oh okay, yes, that's what I was looking for. :-)
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Well he's train wreck , So is this song lol
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No, he's the train wreck not the song. :-)
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I added some harmony , needs to be mixed better
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My apologies for not commenting sooner Elvis, but I was waiting to see if anyone else picked up on something I'm about to mention.
I liked everything about the song , lyrics, the message, (been there many times), the presentation was apt for the content and the music itself.
I did, however, come away with one thing that stuck in my ear and wasn't good. That was the repeated use of the word "wreck" at the end of the chorus. To me, and I accept this is a highly personal note, it sounded like a dog barking. Since at the time of writing nobody else has mentioned it, I accept it is probably just my own earworm.
As such, I would either ignore what I say or consider changing to using "train wreck" just twice.
It did however, get me thinking about words that others don't like, rather than raise the question on your thread I'll do so in the General Discussion and give you first
crackat replying.Good song,
Sid
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Barking ? Sounds like Wreck to me . The harmony is a bit hot , it'll be tuned down some . it felt right in the studio , there's to much music lag , So added the wrecks . My voice does sound like a dog that drank whiskey and smoked a pack of cigs anyway lol
Thanks
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I particularly liked these lines:
There ain't nothing clearer
Than the first look in the mirror
I'm not a fan of the repeat on "wreck" at the end of the chorus either. Sounds a bit harsh. I think you might be better off mixing it up a little there.
But the song overall is sound.
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I'll leave them , Songs a train wreck , it's meant to be harsh . This guy is a mess , that's the best part of the song , All the wrecks
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No worries Elvis! You know what you want there.
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Mix is hot on Harmony , will mix that lower and add snapping fingers on verses
My voice is harsh anyway lol. it reached number one on that chart I'm using , A few people must of liked it
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now its done , mix is everything
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Dang fine toon. Seems like you have your own take on country music. I'll keep tooning in. Thanks.
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New harmony guy blends well
Thanks
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Where is the new one? Do I click on the same link?
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Same link. snapping fingers in first verse
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*bobbing head* singing "Wreck"(4 times)
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Well that pounds the hook in that's for sure
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