If you (correct version)

Skandha
Italy
That’s the new version, for which many thanks to Gavin and Sid, and all of you for your help.
https://youtu.be/DiDfDK5QUjU?si=PUantuiBbUHWuUAG
Lyrics: me Music: Suno/Riffusion Beta
If you
feel upset
just think
one thing
Brother:
everything
that is not love
is emptiness
If you
Are in a corner
With wounds
And blood my sister
Just think
everything
that is not love
is emptiness
One mind
of pure
compassion
and love
That’s all
That’s all
That’s all
Remember
Om
Namo Buddha-ya
Namo Shiva-ya
Namo Joshua
Om
namo Buddha-ya
Namo Shiva-ya
Namo Joshua
One mind
of love
one mind
of peace
and one thousand
of deities
Come now
to protect you
If you
forget
all laws
just think
Sister
Everything
That is not love
is emptiness
If you
are lost
in the jungle
Just think
Brother
Everything
That is not love
is emptiness
Om
Namo Buddha-ya
Namo Shiva-ya
Namo Joshua
Om
namo Buddha-ya
Namo Shiva-ya
Namo Joshua
There's not one of us that exists on their own
But everybody exists in the mind
Of great love
Om
Namo Buddha-ya
Namo Shiva-ya
Namo Joshua
Om
namo Buddha-ya
Namo Shiva-ya
Namo Joshua
https://youtu.be/DiDfDK5QUjU?si=PUantuiBbUHWuUAG
Lyrics: me Music: Suno/Riffusion Beta
If you
feel upset
just think
one thing
Brother:
everything
that is not love
is emptiness
If you
Are in a corner
With wounds
And blood my sister
Just think
everything
that is not love
is emptiness
One mind
of pure
compassion
and love
That’s all
That’s all
That’s all
Remember
Om
Namo Buddha-ya
Namo Shiva-ya
Namo Joshua
Om
namo Buddha-ya
Namo Shiva-ya
Namo Joshua
One mind
of love
one mind
of peace
and one thousand
of deities
Come now
to protect you
If you
forget
all laws
just think
Sister
Everything
That is not love
is emptiness
If you
are lost
in the jungle
Just think
Brother
Everything
That is not love
is emptiness
Om
Namo Buddha-ya
Namo Shiva-ya
Namo Joshua
Om
namo Buddha-ya
Namo Shiva-ya
Namo Joshua
There's not one of us that exists on their own
But everybody exists in the mind
Of great love
Om
Namo Buddha-ya
Namo Shiva-ya
Namo Joshua
Om
namo Buddha-ya
Namo Shiva-ya
Namo Joshua
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Comments
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Much better, kudos for sticking with it, worth the effort you put in.
Well done.
Sid
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A bit repetitious for me, and not really saying anything. . Also, I don't think the reggae beat is a fit as the phrasing reads more like a mantra or chant. It would be interesting to see how this sounds as a Gregorian chant :).
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@bhengen It’all very subjective, but as I said, the lyrics are free for anyone’s experiment.
About saying nothing, you will be surprised if I say that the main sentence of the song took me several years of study and meditation 😂But for other people can be just obvious and not original, that’s true! Sometimes you discover hot water and are joyful even if it’s not a great novelty!0 -
You say lyrics by you , but don't scroll them , You also need a description with Keywords in it
Very pretty song
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Thank you Elvis! You’re right, I’ll write under the video the keywords , while for lyrics it would take quite long (maybe I need a Program different from I-movie). 🙏 🙏🙏0
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Yeah its a program to do that , scrolling lyrics to match music
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Thank you Elvis!0
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