Dont Know Lyrics
I dont know where I am
I thought I knew everything
I thought I had a plan
Am I seeing double?
Why is everything so much trouble
I go numb
I feel nothing
I see everything I believe in
Fly by like dust in the wind
How do I trust again
If trusting myself
Is looked at as a sin
Telling me to stop
We never even began
Not sure what is true
Not sure what is false
Help me out
Help me out
I shout
Is that doubt?
I see nothing then look again
See what I thought was my friend
I dont know what my eyes see
Without clarification
Not sure what is non or fiction
I follow my intuition
Did I lose my winning?
To soon for me to know
Maybe it's just a piece of
Art with a post
It seems unnatural it seems forced
I'm gunna sit here, head to the airport
Even that seems to be going down
Silence is so loud
Too soon to tell
You kicked me as I fell
Today I realized
I dont know anyone that well
I dont know anything to gel
Did you give it away again?
I'm losing you again my friend
Is this the end, is this the end?
I can't be told to not to break
When you see me stretch to thin
And bend
Over backwards for you I do
Everyone knows that is true
I dont wanna screw it up
Between me and u
But I don't know what to do
I dont know what to do
Comments
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There's a lot you've let go there Kayla,
A tsunami of pain and anguish you needed to get out of your system.
Hope you feel better after getting rid of that lot!
My advice, is to gather all this stuff together, put it in a form that is more structured and repost it.
I've seen too many of your works to know what you are capable of and it's way, way, better than this.
All the bits are there, just redo them and post again.
Take care Kayla
Sid
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Feels like it could be a hip hop song. Did you have a style in mind, Kayla?
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dear kayla I read your song lyrics. It made me a little sad. I don't know your age, but you have your whole life ahead of you. and I agree with Sidshovel. There is a lot of wonder, pain and anger in your story. I know the story behind this text. and I think we all know it. but I would like to tell you that adrenaline is a bad advisor. I see a lot of anger in the progression of your story and in the structure of your text. It is not easy to let go of some things. but anger always has a victim. two people turn away. and wonder why things happened this way. head to the airport. (I like this bit a lot) but you said it already. it feels unnatural and forced. trying to make things work usually doesn't!. so let it go. tell us what the beautiful sides of yourself are and how you would like to see them. and why it became a disappointment greetings rem0
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There a lot of good lines in in the lyrics
Heads up and go1 -
This feels like you're writing from real life. Nothing wrong with that - quite the opposite. However, the listener doesn't know your real life and it's hard to engage with a stranger's emotions. You might try situating us somewhere. Maybe at the airport. You're sipping your coffee, remembering that look in their eyes as they said whatever they said or did whatever they did, how it felt at that moment rather than just a general "this is how I feel about things." Paint us a picture so that we're there with you when all this is happening.
Some good lines here, especially...
I can't be told to not to break
When you see me stretch so thin
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Whoa! @Kayla813 I believe you've just encapsulated finely the feeling of depression and confusion this chaotic world wreaks of. This is NOT your fault. There are evil powers currently working hard against the people; trying to break our spirits, steal our souls, steal the country's soul, even. A Divide and Conquer if you will. This is why you're losing friends. Believe me, I know!
What to do? Keep on writing and getting it out and NEVER GIVE UP, NEVER GIVE IN. You ARE wonderful you in the image of God Almighty and nobody can take that away, EVER. Don't ever doubt it; Know this.
Looking closer at the form. I'm a little confused as to which is the Chorus or are there two? If this were my song, I'd take your strongest words and make them the chorus to repeat. Maybe, your opening lines since they contain your title.
Feeling for ya. Stay strong,
Renee 💌
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Can I begin to tell you Renee how much your comment meant to me? It actually made me smile and speak out loud, "wow, someone believes me", my middle name is Renee,
Thank you for confirming and understanding to what is really going on in our sad sad world,
Believe it or not, I was a member of the previous forum that they tore down;
ALL my songs were happy love songs, then they "updated" the page and all songs were deleted,
Real nice huh???????
Thanks to everyone else that commented, yes I am made in the image of GOD,
and it's so sad what is going on, it really is1 -
@Kayla813 You're welcome, dear. And I appreciate very much that you took kindly to my comment. You are very bright for acknowledging the wicked way of this world. That's your Holy Spirit at work within you. And with that, and the help of the Father Almighty's truth, you can cast away any demons.
Oh, and I 'believe you' alright! We're all in this battle together whether we want to acknowledge it or not! Free will is a marvelous gift but it's up to each of us to use it wisely. I'm no saint but I've learned a lot along the way at 62 years of age. And I was a late bloomer. Young people today, I marvel at how much they know that I didn't at their age. I'm assuming you're a lot younger than me? You don't need to say if you don't want to.
Try to keep your chin up as they say and I look forward to more of your lyrics; STAY REAL and write EVERYTHING; good, bad, happy, sad; it's ALL GOOD when your heart is in it! And writing makes for a great outlet as life is a struggle. The only way around the struggle each of us face is an outlet of which you have. So, you're already way ahead of the game!
Yours truly,
Renee 💌
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The last version of the site wasn't just torn down Kayla. The company that was hosting it shut down, so we were forced to move. Sadly the software we had just wouldn't run on the new site - it was too old. It was start clean or shut the whole thing down for good.
A lot of songs were lost, and that hurts. But believe me, it wasn't done for political reasons or anything like that. This was the only way we could keep going.
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I'm 37; I always hold on to hope for a miracle and still believe anything is possible, but it is definitely not the world we once knew, and it's sad if you say anything that is evil-doing done to you, when you have the fingers pointed at you.
I trust what the Holy spirit shows and tells me, he has never steered me wrong, I don't like being silenced when I know I'm right,
But yes, writing saves my life, and its one of my many God giving gifts,
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@Kayla813 I couldn't agree more! I failed to mention, anytime you need an ear or a shoulder, just private message me. If I'm busy being a good little tax-slave, I may not get right back with you but I will do my best to be timely.
Renee 💌
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