It's a good one J.D.!
Can definitely imagine this one playing on the radio.
I like that you keep coming back to: That ain’t what I’m into
hammer it home!
In the chorus, these two lines struck me as being different in that they don't obviously revolve around her Drivin’ around town
Playin’ Def Leppard real loud
you could possibly amend them like:
Drivin' her around town
She loves Def Leppard real loud
And in the last line of v2 I think you've just missed a word and it's meant to be:
That guys try every time
or something like that.
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I really like this one. Great rhyming throughout. Only little thing I see is change the line some guys just buy girls a drink to some guys just buy drinks. I don’t feel it necessary as in the next line girls are mentioned. Probably one of my favorites that you have written. I was that first guy for many years, probably why we write such different styles.😂
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