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MASempine
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Don’t intend to record it but maybe just provide it for churches to use at no cost. Any thoughts would be appreciated

Our God is - Jonah’s God
No detour foils his plan
I won’t becomes you can
Our God is - Jonah’s God

Our God is - Balaam’s God
He warns when we digress
Demands our very best
Our God is Balaam’s God

Our God is - Joseph’s God
His brothers sought the worst
God’s plans were not reversed
Our God is - Joseph’s God

Our God is - Daniel’s God
He warns when we digress
Demands our very best
Our God is - Daniel’s God

Our God is - David’s God
Five stones all smooth and round
Goliath shook the ground
Our God is David’s God

Our God is - Rahab’s God
She rescued Israelites
Help them escape at night
Our God is Rahab’s God

Our God is - Peter’s God
Though he denied our Lord
Chose Him to preach His word
Our God is - Peter’s God

Our God is - Samson’s God
Though he was mocked and blind
His will and God’s aligned
Our God is - Samson’sGod

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MASempine, Our God is the true God. I also really like this song. I like it how each verse can be a chorus to a song on its own, and the way it's structured makes it very catchy and memorable. Great Job

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Thanks NJB

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I like the structure here too. Each verse touches on a different story or message - it's nice.

All the verses are different except
Our God is - Balaam’s God and Our God is - Daniel’s God. I would probably change one of these so they are not the same.

Also, I may not be reading this right but am not sure of the use of Him in line 3. To me it makes sense if it was not there.

Our God is - Peter’s God
Though he denied our Lord
Chose Him to preach His word
Our God is - Peter’s God

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You’re right on Andrea. I cut pasted Daniels God to make Baalam’s God then didn’t finish it.


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