|Joined: ||Mon Jun 21st, 2010|
|Location: ||New Mexico USA|
|Just found this. It does read like a poem, but that saves us the trouble of trying to find a rhythm in it. I think this is really cool. Draws a real nice and peaceful picture. I'd like to hear it with music. Might even simply be a poem set to music. NOthing in the world wrong with that....It's hard to find something truly wrong with it because I like it a great deal. This needs to be read in church. The message has real relevance and is very timely.