View single post by terrypicker
 Posted: Mon Jul 5th, 2010 11:37 pm
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Location: Grand Junction, Colorado USA
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Roy there is very little left to do on this song.  I think you can change one line in the bridge and  add a second half to the chorus and be pretty much be done with it. You're welcome to any of my ideas if you want them Roy.  This is too good of a song not to finish!

My room is filled with darkness
I have so many sins
I’ll never get to Heaven
They will never let me in

Now I walk the straight and narrow
One step at a time
I know that I am Heaven bound
With Jesus at my side

Last edited on Fri Jul 9th, 2010 01:23 pm by terrypicker

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