|View single post by DunedinDragon|
|Posted: Fri Apr 9th, 2010 11:50 am||
|I agree with Dennis. This is a great idea but I'm not sure how you'd pace it. Logic would say you'd need a chorus that would fit between the two verses and after the second verse, but the chorus doesn't really fit too well with what's being said in the first verse. I wonder if you could do a 'variation' chorus between the first and second verse that starts with "My room is filled with darkness" with the same pace and meaure as the other choruses, but different words...something along those lines. But the song itself is a great idea!!
Sometimes I like to think on
All the places that I've been.
How I learned the lessons of my life
I wouldn't want to learn again.