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 Posted: Thu Apr 8th, 2010 04:02 am
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Dennis Railey



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Hey Roy, I love this, it sounds like something my dad would have arranged to speak through parts of it and then come in with singing.  Unless it's done with a very slow feel, which it could be, the chorus seems a little short.  Overall, great story and writing.



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