View single post by RainyDayMan
 Posted: Thu Dec 3rd, 2009 09:44 am
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C2 wrote: I certainly liked it since it reminds me of how my wife plays our old upright piano that is a prominent piece in our living room. I agree some additional rhymes might work, but only if they serve the message well.

I also like the uniqueness of "One foot front", as I am not familiar with the phrase. It adds to the nice flavor of the song. I say it's worth developing for sure. 

Thanks Curtis. I was definitely going for that traditional style. I liked "one foot front the other as well". I havent heard it elsewhere either, as far as I know I just made it up.

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