View single post by RainyDayMan
 Posted: Wed Jul 21st, 2021 10:43 pm
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Joined: Thu May 17th, 2007
Location: Stratford, Australia
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Yeah, I get that chronologically he's going to drive into work before he can walk around the city streets.

But this line feels like the most important part of the setup:
It’s too much city for this back woods boy
and it would be good to get to that quickly.

But as always, it's your song, and only you know what takes it towards what you want it to be. You've thought about it, so stick with your instinct!

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